Sugar (poem) by Melissa C. Rives on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 6, 2003

i like this

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

Truly amazing Melissa...

You need a book ;)

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

Melissa,
You are so talented, and such a beautiful soul, your work shines...always! This is a very touching, and very true write! I truly loved it!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

One day when I click on one of your poems I may be disapointed, but not so far and definately not today! Wonderful Melissa! Mal.

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on March 28, 2003

Awesome writing

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2003

when there's sorrow there is sweetness somewhere...

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley

Reviewed on March 27, 2003

... it is well with your soul; i cant tell from the positive thrust of this lovely poem.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 27, 2003

Melissa, outstanding write. Much wisdom in age.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2003

Melissa, now I can see my foresight in writing a song with you. You are using what songwriters call "power" words. In other words your words explode in this poem.
Stagger the mind and heart of the reader, and stun someone like me who knows how hard it is to develop a style like this. Each time I read you, you have taken another step upward like climbing the stairs to Heaven. Please let me know if you write something you think would be an excellent song. I know you know what yor are doing and the meaning of your work. God love for you and for your talent and ability. Please if you want to here how well she can write song lyrics, go to my
site:

http://www.postpoems.com/members/kojak24

and click on our co/authored song:

"I Can't Forget Your Love." and listen to
her sweet and passionate lyrics. Bill

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

So beautiful

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

Beautiful write...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

Words and verses...perfect. A gem.
~E

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

Your poetry flows so well
and is always outstanding....

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

Beautiful and reflective. Great write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

Always first rate...beautifully depicted acceptance of the traces of time...

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

It is a strength that would not shine
if not for wisdom learned�

... Really Brilliant Writing!