If Only For Clarity (poem) by Melissa C. Rives on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

melissa,
Im about to use a word I dont belive I have ever yet used in a review......gifted!Blessed, take your pick! Take both! Use it well dear lady, and may you wield only your sword for good!
Rodney Evan Bohen

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

i know what you mean... and your words just said it perfectly that i could not... thanks...

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

If...I could write such lovely poetry.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

Beautiful imagery of a moment. Great write.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

A beautiful poem and with excellent rhyme and flow...a pleasure to read.
Chrissie

Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

very pretty expression of longing

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

Melissa, excellent poem. Your words inspire me. You have a very smooth style.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

Is one moment enough?
Simply well worded....

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

You're such an inspiring writer....Love reading you..I wanna be just like you when I grow up ;)

Excellent poetry indeed!!! Thank you, Dani :)

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

lovely work Melissa

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

beautiful poem!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

It always feels great if we could catch the moment. Great write Melissa!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Lady Peg

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

Melissa this took off before I finished my ps and as your style it is stunning beauty.
Your poems are always emotional.
Peg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

If only... that first love;-)Beautifully done Melissa

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

So very good.
Peg

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

... this is nice; your rhymes are very mature [my term for well developed, lacking any real knowledge of poetic jargon :]

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

Beautiful.......

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

A beautiful write. Excellent.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

This was so lovely! A beautifully written poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lisa Coleman

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

Very nicely put and very inspirting!