Come The Night (poem) by Melissa C. Rives on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karen Cino

Reviewed on June 3, 2003

Excellent write. I can definitely relate to it.

Reviewed by mz kimi

Reviewed on June 2, 2003

beeeautiful!

Reviewed by Baddog1

Reviewed on May 31, 2003

it is but a rainbow among the real storm

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on May 26, 2003

As i always expect your poems to be: -- absolutely beautifuly !!!
(nature and feelings) -->>> are great poetic choices!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Absolute beauty of a write...
Enjoyed reading it...

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

This was so lovely, have a nice week off!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

well written...a masterpiece!!

Be back soon.....and take care

love
Tinka

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

An absolute beautiful write
enjoyed immensely

William

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

After reading this, I can say my soul was definitely fed ;)

I love this!

--Karissa

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

beautiful write, melissa! have a great week, and you will be missed here at the den! say hi to your kiddos and give 'am all (((Big HUGS))) from texas! :) love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :) (((HUGS))) for you, too! :)

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Perfect meter and rhyme Melissa! You write so magnificently! Such a pleasure to read!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Melissa,
Your way of expressing yourself is truly a gift! I love the last stanza in this!
Hope your trip goes well, and will be looking forward to your return!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

this is very serene and beautiful, tks :)

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Melissa, hurry back but have a good time. That doesn't sound right. Love your poem, as always. Well done. I always look for your name on the board. Love reading your poetry. I love rhyme, especially when it is done to perfection.

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Melissa,
Nice lines, enjoy your time away, will miss ya.
Rodney

I listen as the shadows fall
intent on hearing nature speak.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

top notch! beautiful poem...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Classic....

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Melissa,
Just beautiful
"I’ve found my center once again
where soul is fed for what it yearns…
I’ll keep the solace in my heart
until the night once more returns. "
have a good time return soon
you will be missed
Peggy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Others are finding it hard to find superlatives as I always have ;-)always flawless work from you...Have a great time away...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

"...I’ve found my center once again
where soul is fed for what it yearns…
I’ll keep the solace in my heart
until the night once more returns..."

Beautiful verses. Have fun. Hurry back.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

I agree with Dana. What a wonderful poet! You always move forward. You never take a backward step. I am so honored to know you are my friend. Bill

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

You have sculpted another masterpiece that leaves behind images of pure beauty.
Amor

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

This is great poetry!