His Sin (poem) by Donna Maris on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

This was so beautifully written, just spoke to my heart this morning, I loved your strength to say no, when your heart wanted to say yes, wonderfully written,

Reindeer

Reviewed by William Heffner

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

This is proof of our need for a relationship with perfection, because imperfection is never dependable.

Keep the faith, your best days are ahead of you.

Knowing Perfection and Keeping The Faith

Officer William Heffner

Reviewed by Lynne Braithwaite

Reviewed on August 1, 2003

Donna. Thank you so much for sharing this with us all.Yes, you did right to say "NO".

Reviewed by Donna Maris

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Thanks to everyone.. Its very hard to say no when your heart says yes.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Donna, whatever old loves I have known are in the past and will stay there. For it does happen, I have found a greater love than all of them put together. Sometimes comes very late in life. You are wise in saying no to the old love. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Well done write, Donna. This is an excellent expression of something many do not know that it is almost always worse the second time around. Love changes and the only way two can experience those differences in time apart is when you are together all throughout. It is always better off to start new with someone else than to try to relive what has once failed.
Amor

Reviewed by Linda Murray

Reviewed on July 16, 2003

Straight to the point I'd say. A very powerful write indeed.

Reviewed by Merrill Vaughan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 16, 2003

A very good write. Tells it like it is.
Butch

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 16, 2003

Excellent... what powerful words!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 16, 2003

Excellent write, Donna! (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 16, 2003

(((donna)))

"...urgently confessed your greatest sin
never stopped thinking what could have been
you never stopped loving me
you never stopped loving me"

o, what powerful words...bet he's ruing the day

glad you told him "no"

loved this excellent write!

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 16, 2003

"His Sin" flows from the heart of reality to imagination's dreams under the rhythms of desires and feeling of losing, but dancing on the waves of love.

I enjoyed reading "His Sin"

Thank You for sharing Your art.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 16, 2003

Screw him, he'd only leave a second time. Good write.

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on July 16, 2003

Good for you for saying no to an old love (even if it was 12 years ago). I too had an old love come back into my life -- someone I loved my freshman year of high school. He was my first love as it were. When he found me again we were both married and he had three children and other issues. I was on a rollercoast ride with him -- I loved again and was very happy. It almost proved diasterous for my marriage. Then when I met him in person, he let me down but I also discovered he was not what I thought he was. I've not heard from him in two years since my visit. Your poem brought back the feelings and memories from that experience. While sad, I found healing and freedom in your words. Excellent piece.