The ongoing verbal jousting duet
continues.Look closely - see me winking?
Enjoy! =)
MAC:
Baby Dee
oh, it's gone public
i'm about to go postal
break you down, way down
landlocked or coastal
you will feel it
when i deal it
so reveal your cards
you tell tales
like a master
but you're no bard
i'm beginning to think
you hang with the three bears
(someone's been sitting in my chair)
i should call you goldilocks
cuz the only thing platinum
is your hair
laughing at my pic
laugh you didn't
(that was drool)
look down at the paper
where your words are written
blue lines blur
the words begin to fade
my smile made you think
hmmm, i like his shade
never claimed to be king
but i do wear a crown
bout for bout
i take em out
and i break em down
now i think it's about time
for the bell to sound
tell me
who will the judges say
won this round?
DONNA:
You are slicker than Willie
Crystal like Ice,
Deliver like Dominos
Always ring twice..
No need to loosen' it,
Baby girl is juicing it ,
not Goldie or a bear..
Ya don't wanna go there..
come to think of it,
the Throne is MY chair
don't be messin up my lair,
so fine a Redhead , with Platinum Girl -
You cannot compare!
Baby Girl is
laying down the Dare!
The words I write
wanna take flight
taking up a byte
I can be fly
you know Im right
be a heavy like Mike
rock it steady like Aretha
sock it, a rhyming rocket
got the key, dawg,in my pocket
turning it loose you know Im gonna jam
tuning it up - Mac is getting hooked
turning it on- louder cause I am
Lil Red will be booking it
Mac is feeling flames
rising hotter from the rhyming pan.
Baby girl has phrasing and cooking it.
Whatcha got? =)
MAC:
What I've got is another
a man with six brothers
you're about to get iced
like uncle ben has rice
and jerry rice has receptions
no deceptions
or decepticons
i'm optimus prime
and you're megatron
so go go go back to the lab
and produce some words
that rhyme
i'm not wack but i'm apt
to just draw the line
if you get too close
i'm apt to just bump and grind
then lift you up
with a verse
that's right on time
DONNA:
Gonna give purpose maximum
'Cause you know I'm all about Platinum
You know me . I said it.
take me on live to regret it
turn the beat back around
To this Red Queen
you'll be bowing
face will be staring
Red Queen issuing a meltdown.
Mac is dancing with a quaver
begging me for a favor
Lil Red is cooking with grease
melt in your mouth
DYNOMITE
Hip Hop Flava .
With just one I can synthesize
Not Resting - Im gonna crank it
My words do hypnotize
not a free flowing sermon
my verse will determine
Tripping, Mac will adapt
he says he's a brother who's apt
to challenge me in rap.
Electric meter loves to rhyme
even maid Rita's Meter lost to mine
spicegirl redhead will combine
issuing a terse verse so divine
killing time like insecticide
Im dropping the weed
there is no need to be
tracking my speed
leave you in the dust
Gonna bend Mac like Beckham
pursuing maximum thrust
Red Queen is flying
My words they're not lying
I got it
I flaunt it
Writing from underneath
my Lil Red Hood.
Lol. This is GREAT! Who is this you collobrated with on this? I usually can't stand rap but this was right up my alley. I love good banter and you've got it here.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
I thought this was great!
Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)
Reviewed on June 8, 2003
I think we're looking at a twelve round prizefight here. This is great. Deliver like Domino's, always ring twice. Yeah, that works for me.
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tony
excellent!
Reindeer
May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
the verbal banter continues in excellent fashion
you go, girl! :)
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
~Nikki~