Fields of melons
Ripe tomatoes in view
We'll pick under the blazing sun
Straw hat to shade my pate
Skin tanned dark, turned leathery
From years of work, in summer heat
This job sure as hell, ain't neat
Before the sun stands high
In the noon sky
I'm weary, beat
Water nor cola won't quench
My thirst from the dusty, dry
Sweat like a pig
Smell like one too
Twenty-five of us
Empty baskets piled high
At row's end
Three hundred acres
'Til we're done
No wonder my back
Creaks, aches
I feel like a trained ant
Pulling the fruit from the plant
To myself I begin to ask
Lord, can't some of these baskets
Fill themselves, while I shade myself
Neath that tall, lonely old aok
I'm tired, weary folk
This picking job
It's a terrible joke
Regis
Your poem igraphic and personal, making it valuable to your readers. I like the sweat part and the back ache. Those are real life stuf, of course. Give us more. - Bill
One year we went pinon nut picking, takes forever to fill a thimble with nuts. Yet, pick potatoes, and your basket is full with just a few. Instant gratification, is sometimes what makes the difference in the 'pickings'.
God bless you. Kathy
We have to feel for the field hands.Fine poem!
You put us there and make us feel the backbreaking labor...whew. Excellent, gives us new appreciation for those willing to work for little to nothing. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Carole~
Christine