Tightly clenched in one hand is his scythe
The arc, symbolic of the finality of its cut
The reins of his fiery steed wrapped taut
About the bony white digits of his other hand
Fate is being exhaled in tremendous vortexes
From the nostrils of his mount
Darker than a black hole is the steed
At speed that bends and distorts light
The duo traverse and instantly span any distance
Within the universe immense
From the fringes of creation their journey began
That nebulous region north, south, east and west of infinity
Flashes of pulsating light pierce the darkness
Gaseous matter crackles and hisses providing a faint glimpse
A shadowy outline of the rider, the steed and their path
The rider is all bone--fleshless
He is hooded in mystery and cloaked with the unknown
No distinct figure emerges
Two fiery expressionless embers, glare from within the hood
Fixed with singleness of purpose
From where once surely the eyes of a mortal
Must have resided
His foray ordered by the ultimate authority
Its purpose most clearly defined, the time exact and deadly precise
All manner of stealth does he employ
Every device solely at his discretion
For detection is an option not granted unto him
The intended victim known only to the creator
And this special envoy from out of the where and why
Never is his intended victim
Before hand known
None shall elude or evade the rider and his steed
When their intent, is to terminate
No one can, their journey impede
Relentless is the pursuit
There is no defense for his onslaught
Swiftly and precisely the task is executed
Each ride by the duo sealing the fate of the intended
Without debate
No one is ever--late
Blessings and Love - Micke
Here comes Picky Petunia. The comma between light & pierce isn't needed, and it causes a pause that interrupts the flow that you
engineered to perfection. (See also "...intent,is to..."} Plus
I believe you meant to write "taut," rather than "taught."
Now go back and read the first sentence. It is way-out more important
than Petunia's pickin'. Love your work, Jon Willey!!
xOx Phyllis xOx
Blessings,
Sheri
You reached inside darkles hours here!!
I LOVE IT!!!
The ending line!! Perfectly Stated
& also gives those errie goose bumps
you know those ones that stike & penetrate!
WOW....very very good
Love & Shadows Illuminated
Vickie
Ron
Although great, I don't think this creation rings of Poe. Wouldn't it have been wonderful to have lived back in his time, so we could have our own styles immortalized? lol. I sense the same ring of respect for the reaper in your poem that I used in my Death poems. Especially in your poem, there is a fantastic feeling of superhero. Reminds me of that rider movie with Nick Cage. Poe mostly used death and darkness as an accent, a threat maybe, even a mood. He seemed to show more reverance for his characters than he did for death. It seemed like an obvious outcome to him. Just my take. I'm a fan of his, but I haven't read all. Just the same, the imagery in this poem pops and I have an eerie feeling of being unable to escape this ghastly character. I'm glad you mentioned it to me. Enjoyed!
Sheila
Fantastic story/poem!
God bless you. Kathy
Regis
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love,
Becca~