You Left Me (poem) by Jon Michael Willey on AuthorsDen

You Left Me
by Jon Michael Willey → (All Poetry by Jon Michael Willey)
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Lost love.
Tears and fears I suffered Thinking of all the years wasted Gone my security, my love, my harmony Taken by the brown eyed man Stranger to my life Stole your love from me Gave his you think, for free Soon you will know There is no light of the moon To make your life glow He'll use and abuse you Drop you into the trash heap of used up hearts When he decides to take off for other parts You'll not be in his plans For a new start Then tears and fears you will suffer I will no longer be a buffer When you left you took my caring So I will not be sharing Impulses from the gleam in a stranger's eyes Are better held in abeyance Not given consideration for a second glance For it is not the gleam of romance It is the stare of lust Aimed to excite the passion hidden in you Better to have looked for another view And now I say only, adieu You wrenched my heart from me It carries no sympathy

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 5, 2008

I LOVE THIS BEAUTIFUL, SAD POEM!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on March 8, 2008

YOU got that right LOUD and CLEAR!
Now, you move on stronger than before!
I like your heart and Bio, and decided to TRAck/FoLLow your heart and soul Jon
YOu have an expressive way of getting your points across - Similiar to my own!
In this poem, I've been right HERE, and time to see it - realize it and be FREE of it! As your SELF comes back and love finds the New YOU!
hmmm...
I know I will be back, glad I gravitated into your direction!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings, LIGHT, LOVE and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheoooxooo

STay Positive!
STay STrong!

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on March 6, 2008

We always think the grass is greener... We have learning disabilities in that respect!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

A lost love leaves so many empty places, but life does move forward...many of us have been there at least once.

Carole~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 5, 2008

Beautifully written poem of lost love,Jon! I think we all have at least one experience like this, and according to how deep the love it can be real misery!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

I carry no sympathy for my X either.
Great writing..
Ron

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

It sure can be a very cold, bitter world at times, huh? The feel of an aching heart runs right through this piece....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

wow - you can't say you didn't warn her!
Well written.
Becca~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

A sad but recurring theme on with human relationships, Jon. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Powerfully moving, Jon, wel ldone.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Voids come into our lives,,, only to be Filled again. Moving write, very sad.

Christine

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Great writing,stay safe and well and I hope my new poem makes you smile sweetie..Hugssss..I posted it this morning,enjoy

Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams

I think we have all felt this way at one time or another. You express that need for them to hurt as we have been hurt by them . Well done. I hope if this is a poem inspired by a real experience of yours, that you can find a soft place to heal, where anger is a memory that does not cause further hurt to you.

be well and happy,
Kathy

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz

Love is difficult and lost love hurts even more...nice work.