I have found that the only way that my love pains are healed are through a new love... ...and still, there is always a lingering ache that remains. Thank you, my friend. Love and peace to you,
Wonderful expression of a failed romance. I truly feel your emotions and inner feelings about this. thanks dear friend, it is a pleasure to read you always.
Jon,
Beautiful Write.
Time is the captive release of the inflictions of passions love.
Time stands still so that I will feel my loss too from the passions of love I can no longer embrace,
until the heart heals its wounds I stand still at he mercy of the sands of time.
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Jon, it's difficult to rid one's self from the ghost that lingers in our hearts...time doesn't heal the grip the ghost has on our souls and our eternal memories that keep us captors to them. A fantastic write.
Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
wow,great...there's always second chance...i remember Alchemist,the book by Coelho..with words upto such effect..whatever happens for the first time might not happen again,but whatever happens for the second chance might happen for third....but after third ???? Always a positive approach....good write
This conveys the beauty of one not drowning in quick sand,, but living and yes taking that chance on love and romance....Your words are inspirations for a song in many hearts. :)
Christine
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Excellent writing sweet man,enjoyed very much...stay safe and well dear friend...Hugsss
Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2008
Thank you so much Jon for penning the puzzles of words in my heart, unable to quite grasp those floating thoughts into something that makes sense. Your poem uniquely and beautifully conveys the yearning and torture of breaking free of failed romance and dreaming for second chance. Well Done! Deborah:)
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Ron
Beautiful Write.
Time is the captive release of the inflictions of passions love.
Time stands still so that I will feel my loss too from the passions of love I can no longer embrace,
until the heart heals its wounds I stand still at he mercy of the sands of time.
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Christine