Chants echo through the valley floor of night
purple ribbons streak across sky's pink blush
the sun grapples for a final hold on the horizon
from atop a mesa my gaze is westward
sage clusters with mesquite and dust
chaparral cocks race from the coyote's howl
night's invaders, poised to strike any prey
the wind carries the spirit
of a lone quenacho's joyous, melancholy song
ancient's spirits swirl among the clouds
I, an intruder into this land
that was their haunt
seek to commune with them
will they welcome my gesture of peace
will they seek to vanquish me
a peace pipe, my ceremonial offering
though my hand and heart are outstretched
I puff alone the smoke rings of parley
is reciprocity not within their reach
or do they wish me ill
slowly I make my retreat to the valley
I meet with no offers for understanding
no outstretched hand of peace
and so, I can only offer them
my release from parley
Love,
Becca~
peace and love to you, Carole~
Love Tinka
Happy New Year to you and your family!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Blessings,
Christine
I love the way you set the stage with your opening lines: gorgeous imagery! You take us there, and make us want something to happen, a close encounter ... well done.
(((HUGS))) love and Happy New Year!, Karla.
Sad but such is reality...Superb poem!
Love,
Eileen
Very beautiful and descriptive of the surroundings and a peaceful interaction with ancient ones. Enjoyed.
Mary
Ron
intruder's attempt to communicate with the ancient spirits. -gene.
Regis