Adieu (poem) by Jon Michael Willey on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

Once hurt, it's hard to trust. I like how the voice in this poem seems to have the upper hand at the conclusion; he chooses to say goodbye. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on February 4, 2009

oh my...I Love How You Weave Your Words of Deep Emotions
This Is Exceptional In the Heart of Love
But alas...listen...there in the distant I hear the calling of your name
it is the devote destiny of your passage
the new awareness of Love's gifts
ensouled by the carriage of promises....
Much Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2009

The most painful step is that step away and with all the choices we make...we step away too many times...life should be grander...it should allow for so much more....Great read Jon

Reviewed by John Coppolella

Reviewed on February 2, 2009

"quagmire

of disappointment and regrets"

Oh, you read my biography? Excellent work, Jon.

Starman

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 2, 2009

When the path of love reaches a fork in the road and each chooses a different direction it is a sad, heart-breaking end to what once was a beautiful journey...written with rich emotions and a sad goodbye
peace and love to you dear friend, Carole~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 2, 2009

Powerful write, Jon; very well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

You are ever in my thoughts and prayers!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 1, 2009

This one is powerfully penned, Jon. Such sadness in these lines! Don't think yourself as unloved: I love you, and what your words have to say. Well done.

((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2009

A heartfelt writing of the trials and tibulations...of love

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on February 1, 2009

Jon,
I sincerely hope this is muse and not fully personal or 'true intimate'; whichever, it's beautifully expressed, rich in thought, process and language.
John

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 1, 2009

The tragic ending to the expected outcome of a one-sided relationship. Why do we waste so much time building our ship of fools?

Revealing.

Ron

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 1, 2009

Awwwww Jon,,,this is so heartfelt ..the song and dances of the heart can be so tough.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 1, 2009

You write of a universal and ever present theme in this world/life, Jon. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on February 1, 2009

Oh, this is so sad, Jon!!!

Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on February 1, 2009

Sad when love is not returned and lost but if we keep searching its out there the person that is our perfect fit...we just have to keep and opened mind and heart...Great touching write Jon...love and hugs, Bonnie