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Hands InThe Field (revisited - revised)
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My friend John Flanagan's poem, "to be or", was the inspiration to revise and revisit this poem. Thanks, John

fields of melons green striped

in view tomatoes tinted hue of red

this day we'll pick under the blazing sun

straw hats to shade pates full and bare

skin tanned dark, turned leathery

from years of toil in summer heat

this job sure as hell, ain't neat

before the sun stands high in the noon sky

I'm weary, wet and beat

water nor cola quench my thirst

from this day's endless dusty dry

sweat like a pig, smell like one too

twenty-five of us in this labor group

empty baskets piled high at row's end

three hundred acres or more 'til we're done

not to wonder my back creaks, aches

I feel like a trained ant

pullin fruit from the plants

to myself I ask the same question each day

Lord, can't some of these baskets

fill themselves, while I seek respite

yonder, neath that tall lonely old oak

we are all of us, tired, weary folk

this pickin job's nothing but a terrible joke

around our necks are clamped

the invisible yokes of peasant folks 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Hands InThe Field (revisited - revised)"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 16, 2012
CERTAINLY A FINE WORK, JON...YOU'VE VIVIDLY CAPTURED THE LABOR OF PEASANTS SO BEAUTIFULLY ON THIS CANVASS. BUT THEN, YOU ARE AN ARTIST THAT PAINTS EXCELLENTLY...I ALWAYS APPRECIATE YOUR FINE WORK. THANK YOU FOR THIS KEEPER. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
Well I've never picked tomatoes or melons but I have toiled in the sun picking strawberries, raspberries and beans as a youngster/teen. I do remember the long days in the hot sun. Thank you, Jon. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 16, 2009
Vivid pictures are painted in the poem. It takes the reader there.
Hard work and toil reap the harvest of human existance ..M

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on May 31, 2009
You really painted this scene to life with your words. I especially liked that ending and how we start out in the beginning concentrating on the sensual side of fruit and by the end it is the plight of the peasants that we see. Excellent work, Jon. Thanks so much for always reading my work, even when life gets crazy and I cant get to everyone's poems.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 31, 2009
Work of hands to the bone...fantastic imagery, can feel the heat of the sun...and releif as it sets...great job Jon!
Love and Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on May 30, 2009
I would have loved to have that job!!! I love working in the farm or orchards. I don't mind hard work at all!!! You have taken me there with you with this wonderful write!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on May 30, 2009
Jon, your words take me back to my first job position...Detassler :)
I Loved working in the corn fields though...
but watermelon? I see that as a very heavy job for sure...opps did we drop one? Don't waste...taste great!
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 28, 2009
A taste of the migrant life. From 9 to 12, my brother and I picked green beans in the summer. At 14 and 15, we helped old man Nowaki pick his two acres of four kinds of raspberries. At least we got some school money and could go home to a great meal and bed at night.

Ron

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on May 27, 2009
Jon,
So vivid, this scene you paint. I can feel the aching shoulders and back. Reminds me of a book I read about cotton picking. Brutal work. You brought this character to life. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 27, 2009
the creative labor of this poem yields the effort of potent poetic sweat ...

magnificent imagery ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 27, 2009
I truly felt this one, in summer years ago my wife and I would often spend our summer vacations raking blueberries to get enough for school supplies in the fall for our three children. It was backbreaking, wet in the morning with the morning dew and burning hot when the sun comes out and we earned every dime.

fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 27, 2009
Splendid imagery,Jon, I could feel the sweat of your brow!
You write with such command of your subject! Bravo!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on May 27, 2009
If anyone does not get a sore back from reading this, yes you captured real work, very few will know today. Great one Jon!
Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2009
Oh my..as always sweet Jon...Excellent writing from a wonderful man....remember your always in my thoughts OK...Hugss,much love coming your way dear sweet Jon..

Reviewed on May 27, 2009
Beautiful colors and images in your lines, Jon, I don't think you can improve upon perfection. You bring the reader to the fields in vivid verse and make them feel the work; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 27, 2009
Jon, excellent write, so full of strong visuals and images. It reminded me of a time when I consorted with a group of migrant farm workers; picking peaches, knocking almonds and working the apple orchards. I was still in high school but it didn't take much to notice the strain of life on their faccs. Nice writing.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on May 27, 2009
I grew up on a working farm in south Ga. I didn't look forward to the first part of summer all that much because I had to pick and haul watermelons and cantalopes. I busted my butt. I tried my hand at picking cotton one year but I decided that I was better off in school.

Walt

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2009
aah..only a magic wand can do away the toil and turmoil.. wonderful imagination of the aftermath of peasants working in the fields.. good wishes jon.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 26, 2009
Jon, your carefully orchestrated words paint an accurate
portrait of the peasant folks who live and die by their
baskets. As always, excellent. -gene.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 26, 2009
Wonderfully reflective piece of one who has worked hard all his life and now wants to ease back and time will not allow, very moving....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 26, 2009
Thank you, Jon, I'm honoured for the mention, and a fine poem it is...yes, if only the baskets would fill themselves...minor miracles may bring more relief than great ones.
John


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