The Hand of Illusion (poem) by Jon Michael Willey on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 15, 2009

A most interesting turn of your pen Jon Michael, America's politicos...now you see it, now you don't. I have to smile at your take on this
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 12, 2009

interesting form for this stream of consciousness, Jon. I think it works well. And the sustained metaphor is very visual as well as so on point. Both your concept and crafting come together admirably into a work that is strong and convincing in its proposition. Excellent stuff, thank you! :)) xx

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on August 11, 2009

Jon,
A perfect metaphor for how quickly and thoroughly beliefs take over society. Politicians and magicians are one and the same. lol. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 10, 2009

Straight shooting from the hip Jon and you know I love your honest refresssing results.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on August 10, 2009

Jon, this is metaphorically perfect. You cause your readers to sit up and take notice!

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on August 10, 2009

You share some very interesting perceptions, Jon Michael. Politics personified!! Rare to Well Done, methinks :o)
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on August 10, 2009

You have described politics so well . They are floundering in the depths of confusion and mayhem. I pray for clarity !.....M

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

Metaphorically on target, Jon. You tell it like it is, my friend.
Could you spare another pebble of illusion? -gene.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

politics makes us all delusional ;)

well penned ...

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

Jon,
A strong sustained metaphor carries your theme subtly and intelligently, a comprehensive view so satisfying for this reader.

John

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

This is so good Jon,you really have a superb grasp of
politics and can write about it with clarity!

Love and Blessings,
Eileen

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

and "The Hand of Illusion" curses reality of truths...the root of all evil as they say...I want that hand full of dead presidents in my pocket too!
But Jon! Oh Jon! Let me tell you I especially love this "ripple of possibilities" you have so superbly expressed...
or that "pebble of confusion"...or was it a stone?
Ahhh Dearest Jon, your words are so outstanding in their capture of attentions...that subtle toss turning to a boil! Calico thoughts...again �The Hand of Illusion�...oh yes I am "firmly entrenched"! This is more than politics! I Love It~!
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

Glad you told me the premise. Fits it very well.

Ron

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

THE PHRASES ARE WELL WRITTEN PRODUCING VIVID IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

An interesting write that elicits interesting conundrums. Good to read you. Chanti

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

You must have read my mind Jon, or I have tuned in just at the right time, great stuff my friend. Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

When you add confusion to a placid mind that is like a mirrored lake the illusion soon is overwhelmed. Nicely done and love the metaphors.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

What a most interesting perspective, Jon. Thank you for sharing it via your verses here. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

Well done Jon. I like it. I would like to point out that this can also be read {backwards} Making a whole new poem right there.
keep writing..Steve.