Think think think, that is what i did after reading this poetry.

I appreciate the philosophical perspective that you share within your verses here, Jon. As usual, you provide substance for thought. Love and peace to you my friend,

Regis

Introspection is bringing out your best. At least for now, in the game of life, we are only losers. But poetry like this lives on, making your mark on future generations.

Ron

If it's a game -- and I strongly suspect it is --, I don't understand
the rules. If there a r e any. Keep changing--?? All we can do is
find ways to escape [writing being one of the greatest] and keep on
keepin' ON. Right?? Glad I stopped by. This is thought-provoking.
Though it triggers mixed emotions. I am hoping that, as with many of us, the fact that you are writing in the first person does not
necessarily mean that the "I" is you. If it is, that the episode and-or mood that inspired you to write the piece, is in the past. Thank you for sharing this, Jon. Always, and Then, Phyllis

"a wise man neither seeks nor avoids death"

profoundly well written, Jon ...

Sometimes its hard to face what one fears most. One tries to escape into the inner recesses of ambiguity. Darkness can transcend if one lets it..Try to look for the light! Always remember , tomorrow is another day!.....M

Jon, aside from the fact that this is superb, introspective
writing, I find it moving and a bit disturbing from where I sit.
Take good care, my friend. Yu are loved. -gene.

Jon,
You seem to outdo yourself with every write. I like the passionate dark side this poem offers. Hugs,
Sheila

POWERFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

A powerful and honest write...one that makes this reader stop and think.

The others have said most all Jon,you are such a forceful writer,we all hear the struggle going on underneath! my prayers and thoughts are with you! Superb poem!

Love and hugs,
Eileen

Digging deep down are you? I hope it's not six feet, you are certainly rumaging around dark corners here Jon, what made you reflect so defeatedly at this subject? But remember the crysalis, and it's always darkest before you can see a new star.
Love and Peace! Jasmin Horst

Jon,
This is dark and challenging and powerful in its reflections and has for me a personal resonance.

John

This is a dark side of you, Jon Michael...hoping it's not autobio as you are otherwise our cheerful bud. Raise chin and realize the lighter side, friend.
Blessings and Love - Micke
(or..are you playing a game with us? :o)

thoughtful retrospective write here Jon and a difinate mind teaser that automatically sets the gears churning.

fee

...to me this is a haunting write, with underlying anger and frustration trying to surface without an outlet...
this one will continue to haunt me
Peace and love dear friend, Carole~

Is it a game? Ya just never know.....

~W~

We were born to die and some of us rush it unnecessarily.

this is amazing Jon, like the self discovery of inner reflections
or an acceptance of self...an awakening of meaning
so many things to personally feel expressively inside this poem!
Much Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Jon,

This one has a feeling of terror underneath these lines - pray you're okay -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

A powerful piecee of writing that raises many more questions.

Cheers,
Dan