tote gently upon your scroll the words
you scribed from imagination's bribe
the twits that came in spasmodic fits
with that grin of a foolish man's pride
will you dare to share and subpoena
reader's reviews suggesting you emote
in lines not fit for their neighbors goat
bravery 'tis sometimes true is the action
of a fool seeking too much satisfaction
Regis
Laura
Sheila
Such a wonderful poem...about writing a poem. I loved your words.
Mary
The fool reading this.
Ron
Christine
Be alway safe,
Karen
I sometimes speak of 'touch'...to me an almost indefinable quality in writing and in this 'little ditty' as you modestly call it there is abundant touch and wit and style and feeling, all the things that go to make writing memorable; as for the begrudgers, to hell with them, they're frivolous froth who can neither feel or create.
John
Is it for Ourself or for someone else...
I like the way your muse got those strong feelings across!
WE MUST TAKE THE GOOD WITH THE BAD! Even if not easy and leaving one feeling squeezy!
WRITE ON!
READ ON!
Blessings of Peace and Harmony, SOULFUL_PurplePassionsoxxo
I bid us well...
Remember:
If it feels good post it, and let the reviews fall where they may.
We have had some caustic reviewers here from time to time, luckily you weren't around for the last one, he was a real pain. He was just a reader but left negative and personaly attacking reviews for everyone irrespective of the quality of the work.
You're a fine writer Jon. It's good to see the lighter side now and again.
Walt
leaves snowy tracks...
but fires fuel burns brightlty
...them goats...or them bards...
or the spilled ink...
the pen must go on & on & on
we milk goats & make tappioca!! :)
Love for Your Muses Jon
Vickie
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