"The Abyss"
from the rim draconian morbidity reins
up and out concepts bleak in the darkness
of tribunal robes and desperation’s veils
at the bottom no light of reference shines
to seek the master of my conscription
would any needs of validity be served ?
will the abyss consume me or will self ?
upon a base of conflict destruction is built
when we struggle groping aimlessly for purpose
in the vast vacant halls of disestablishment
the corridors to tranquil exit are labyrinths
where deception reins in supreme arrogance
as I cry out for solace and self understanding
only a single voice, my voice of agony echoes
where is the love the confidence that once
embraced me, comforted me cradled me
I surely have abandoned it for the mysteries
of a plateau on the plains of misconception
I dwell at the bottom of the abyss and know
it is I that have chosen the wrath of the path
to a place where no man of logic would dwell
mayhem and purgatory could not have conspired
nor built this holding place where life and soul
are held in abeyance, in judgment, this road to perdition
10/03/2010
Jon Michael Willey
A powerful poem! A timeless message. I especially appreciate the part about accepting one's own part in it. Ultimately those are the thoughts that suck us farther into the pit. It's a test of strength to climb out from there. Glad you made it. Hugs,
Sheila
the word lover in you is so captivating
your soul pours through and grabs me
this is a wonderful offering although in the
vice grips of darkness...the wristlets of impunity
Loves Candle Lit Chambers
Vickie
Regis
peace and love, Carole~
in my recurring dream, which (I'm happy to say) has not visited me
in the past year. These are the lines that grab me:
when we struggle groping aimlessly for purpose
in the vast vacant halls of disestablishment
the corridors to tranquil exit are labyrinths
where deception reins in supreme arrogance
There is a brighter side, of course, and Jon, you have the
skill to capture it. It's who you are.
-gene.
Love and Blessings,
Christine
fee
George
I keep thinking of how so many of the spirtual masters say that the secret of love is dying. Suffering agony ~ that as long as our little stars are visible, the Sun of the world has not appeared. That comes to mind. Maybe you have been shattering egoism to pieces so's you can become the enlightened master, something so rare.
Each of your reviews to any of us seems to contain wisdom to last a lifetime.
Feel better XXX
Christine
Walt
you're on a wheel of fire here but that you write, and write the
experience so well is testament to courage and life itself.
You're stronger than you think and long may you remain so.
John
Ron