repose
a callous November raped the trees of leaf
naked limbs waves not orange or green hue
low light now plays lazy on splayed chilled bark
forested fir nor oak dare to play submissive
when the whims of hoar frost grip and propose
the magistrate of nature's sentence, long slumber
rose and daisy lay plundered by north winds
hail barraged vulnerable flora and creatures alike
a death masquerade of barren expression clings
breath of the unrelenting witch of the north
hushes the landscape in raw uncultured dress
repose all ‘til spring kisses your lips with revival
11/05/2010
Jon Michael Willey
I rarely comment on so many of the same poet’s works, especially one right after the other, but I'm a new fan and I'm just beginning to catch up.
Thanks Dick
You keep getting better and better. I love the descriptions in this poem. It's harder for poets to come up with original imagery for the many faces of nature, but you've done it. I especially like the first verse. Excellent!
Sheila
We, like the sun find our reasons...walking on bye.
Always a pleasure Jon.
I wrote this for you Jon
"
I never felt secure, except
in the winds
that blew up around me
a life, that gave me
a reason to reach out and hold onto
a world of turbulence
...and the color, that screamed out
onto me
"
Jon I reached out and held on
Ron
Really, Jon. This is o u t s t a n d i n g.
Write ON!
xOx Phyllis xOx
Bessings,
Christine
but apart from the cycle and the thought processes inherent, there is the writing - they're not separate of course, they're intertwined - and the writing is top drawer, the images pared to maximum impact and resonance. This is just so right.
John
Blessings,
Christine
aggressive...assertive...commanding
and seductively taken?
Well I am...be it me or not...
This is a gorgeous offering
"til spring kisses your lips with revival"
Wintry Ice Palace
Vickie
Well in any case it's sort of frost on the pumkin, we got's lots of that there sort of cold breezes and all. Now to your poem, it reaches right down to the bone,(yeah that one) raw, and stinging the nerves of heart and mind, great one Jon!!!!!!!! Bless ya! Jasmin Horst
George
Regis