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You Can't Go Home Again!
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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Going home may not be the same. But you can still love it and mourne for it.


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You Can’t Go Home Again!

 

I get so melancholy sometimes, dwelling so much on the past,

Remembering friends of childhood, & the true ones that last.

I think of teachers I once had, & wonder if they’re still around.

When I look back, I remember fondly, my beloved old coal town.

 

The people there were friendly & very sweet and kind.

Most the women didn’t have jobs & men worked in the mines.

Back then, the town was flourishing with factories and the mines,

The quaint downtown was a jumpin’ with all their five and dimes.

 

The train tracks ran right through the town & the train whistles blew.

I wondered many times, what the town was like brand new.

Because of all the coal in town and smoke from the factories,

It wasn’t the cleanest little town, but it had lovely trees.

 

The last time I was there, I was shocked to my very soul.

The town I loved was gone, and depression took its toll.

The movie theaters I knew and loved, were no longer there.

Everything had changed so much, & no one seemed to care.

 

The first school I started in, was completely torn down and gone.

The list of treasures I had lost that day, was simply too, too long.

It is so true that you can’t go back & expect things to be the same.

For when I left my beloved town, I didn’t even know my name.

 

Written with sadness for a town I loved.

 

Written by, Bonnie May

 
 
 


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Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
Dear Bonnie, Surprisingly I met someone here at Library who is related to an old gym teacher at high school. Miss Krolak was her name and he is her nephew. Small world. Like this poem and the memories it brings, but I did not live in a coal town. Sounds like it was exiciting growing up with trains like that and all. Keep them coming. Love to read them. Lois

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
Such sadness, regret, longing, wishing ... Sounds like my Grandmother's town - a ghost of its former bustling, lively self. But still the beautiful memories live on in my heart.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
Thank Goodness your memories cannot be destroyed,,You painted a wonderful poem full of visions,, I could see the train,,,,
Loved your poem.
Christine

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
...no...you can't go home...but carry it in your heart...much like Thorton Wilder's play...Our Town...seen through ones eyes...even when closed.
...you have penned a home within everyone's heart...
John

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
what a deep and emotional word is HOME. mine was smalltown vermont--a one-room school house etc--a beautiful write

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Aw, Bonnie, you shouldn't have done that; I mean written like that. Now you have me near tears for the Shamokin where we grew up. I hate to tell you, but the wonderful trees in the block where the bandstand is (down from Martz's) have all been CUT DOWN! We loved to play there. We'd zigzag through the trees along the creek bank and play jungle. The 2 forks of the creek meeting there made it so exciting! Oh, my.
But it's not all bad news, and hey, the Coney Island is still there! And you can still buy Bitter Sweet Ice Cream on Market Street, (but it isn't as good as it used to be when it came from the original Martz's.)
This is a sad and wistful write, sure to tug at the heart strings
of all who have had similar experiences. "The times, they are a-changing."

Great work, dear Sister,
Love, Connie

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Very sad indeed Bonnie, you wrote it with deep emotions and the reader can feel the loss. Excellent poem! I agree we can't go back unless we're willing to see the changes that might make us wish we'd never gone.

Love,
ET

Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Wonderful nostalgic piece, Bonnie; you always take us back in time and along with you, to a world peopled with caring folk and not so much to worry about. Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

I was born in Ohio, in Mansfield (see StormSpinner's review below), raised in Ontario, just west of there. Lived there until 1999 April, when I moved to Texas (Wish I hadn't).

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
You are very right, you can never go home again because it will never be the way you carried it in your mind. Time always takes it toll, beautiful and interesting writing....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on February 12, 2008
You took me to your hometown and made me wish I was from there, Bonnie! My hometown was Ontario, Ohio (west of Mansfield, where I was born), it was a nice suburban neighborhood where everyone knew each other, took care of each other ... sigh. Poignant longing here, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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