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Don’t Make Me Go Momma!
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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We've all had bullies in our past and these two were mine. I wonder where they are now and what kind of children they raised.


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Don’t Make Me Go Momma!
 
Oh, I loathed passing the house on the corner of the street.
It was like a punishment when two little girls I’d meet.
They’d call me names and spit at me as I was passing by.
Out came the words & the tongues and always made me cry.
 
To get to the store, you had to pass right by their dreadful house.
Sometimes I would tiptoe, being quiet as a mouse.
Don’t make me go to the store Momma, ask Gary to go instead.
My brother wasn’t afraid of them no matter what they said.
 
I used to dream their tongues got stuck, upon their iron fence.
But if they fell out all together it would probably make more sense.
Please don’t make me go Momma, I would humbly cry.
With a pat on the head, out the door I’d go, hoping to sneak by.
 
However, they always saw me, screamed and called me names.
They never played with other kids, not jacks or other games.
They only had each other; what a sad twosome they made.
It took me years to see that, and for all those names to fade.
 
Written by,
Bonnie May

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Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 19, 2008
I remember bullies, when I was quite young skinny and scared of my own shadow, though I would be glad to meet them now... <evil grin>, ed

Reviewed on March 17, 2008
This brings back memories Bonnie but I'd rather have been the one hurt than the bully. A wonderful write.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
...your write makes me also remember...that short block...with a long walk to the store...and the bully in the bushes...
wonderful poem and picture Bonnie...
John

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
I love your picture, Bonnie; you look so cute with your little braid on top! This is a great poem, very well-written and also totally believable. You did a good job of conveying the feelings of a little girl faced with two tormentors. A wise conclusion in the last verse, too. Too bad I didn't know you then--I fought with a big boy in my neighborhood once, to show I could win the fight, but I lost, boo hoo, so I guess I wouldn't have been much help after all.

Love, Connie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
bullies are indeed very sad and what they do to others can be tragic and so very damaging

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
How tragic. Poor you and poor them. They probably wanted to go to the store with you like you they were so lonesome. To them getting your negative attention was better than no attention at all. they disregarded your feelings like theirs were. And I bet you can still remember every humiliating moment and name you were called. Great write. Liz

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
Let's hope they changed for the better but it is sad that they had so much disregard for another's feelings, a typical bullies trait. The pic is a beauty.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
Love your pic Bonnie! Bully's are the bane of childhood! I can use the word "hate" with no excuse to describe them! I often wondered what went into making them that way, and have concluded that they were never loved.,so in the end we must pity them! Great poem!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
Gosh Bonnie, I know the statistics of one being bullied is very high,, how sad is that? I wish I was on that street corner to help you,,, Your photo is A- Adorable.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
I can relate to this. I was victimized by bullies as well. Not fun! Thank you, Bonnie. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed on March 16, 2008
Bonnie, I was never the victim of bullies exactly, but I was teased now and then and I remember how bad that felt, so I felt your pain as you approached that house in dread and wished your brother could go instead. I am sorry for every child who ever had to go through that. Your poem was very effective, moving and communicated well, even to the point of where you stopped being a victim by understanding that in some way, your tormenters were victims too.

cudos,
be well and happy,
Kathy

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
I know how you felt, but I was a boy and little boys get fed up with fear and take revenge...then, the house in the corner is just another house with a couple of yappy ones...

Georg


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