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I Can't See Your Imperfections
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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Sometimes people look at the wrong things when they need a friend.


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I Can’t See Your Imperfections!
 
I can’t see your wrinkles, when I look at you.
I only see the sunshine, that comes shinning through.
I can’t see the age spots or the thinning hair.
I can only see a heart, of one who always cared.
 
I can’t see any imperfections, when I look at you.
I can only see the honesty, of one who is true blue.
I don’t see your body that has become old and weak.
I can only see the person, who’s been my special treat.
 
I don’t see the cane you use, when you need to get around.
I can only feel your strength, and your self-reliance abound.
No, I can’t see anything about you, that I would amend.
For if I ask God for a perfect friend, you are what he’d send.
 
Written by,
Bonnie May
 

 


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 Reviews of "I Can't See Your Imperfections"
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
There are many people in my life for whom this poem fits. They are a perfect gift. This is beautiful and heart warming.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed on March 19, 2008
Beautiful write, Bonnie; very well penned~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 19, 2008
"...because if I ask God for a friend...you are what He would send..."
That phrase makes the wrappings of a priceless present in form of a poem dedicated to that special person.
I am lucky too, from AD God send me a few too.

Georg

Reviewed on March 19, 2008
Oh, Bonnie, would that ALL of mankind felt like this - there would be no prejudice, hatred, discrimination - my new favorite of yours! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 19, 2008
Within, is the wind of love,,,:)

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on March 19, 2008
This should be a greeting card, Bonnie; this poem is a beautiful work of art! How true that our imperfections mean nothing in the hearts and minds of our friends, just as their flaws mean nothing to us.

Thanks,
Jill

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
...your words are unblemished...of one you hold close...and to see one with acceptance and goodness...is perhaps God's definition of love.
wonderful Bonnie...
John

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
I love this--your writing is so tender and loving--love covrs so many seeming imperfections

Reviewed on March 18, 2008
It's a great blessing to be seen through eyes of love. Wonderful poem Bonnie.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
And what a great friend you are to feel this way! God bless you Bonnie! A wonderful uplifting poem!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
Wow this is a terrific compliment and would make her feel so proud.


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