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You’d Have it All
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Oh I love my new fangdagled contraptions just like everyone else. But I would give them all up tomorrow if....................................


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You’d Have it All
 
Material things are so important to some.
If they don’t have an object, they really want one.
I agree that material things are nice to own.
But they pale in comparison to love in your home.
 
I could be happy in a little old shack,
If I had love, someone watching my back.
Someone to hold me when life was unkind.
Someone to be there with me, during a bind.
 
You’d be surprised at what you could do without.
Food is one thing, you wouldn’t be as stout.
You wouldn’t need a TV, computer or phone.
If you had the right person sharing your home.
 
You would actually feel sorry for those with so much.
For they have no idea the feeling of that unique touch.
They might even envy you for the love you share.
For you’d have it all, with your love sitting there.
 
Written by,
Bonnie May

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Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 11, 2008
They say that a man's house is his castle, that king living there most be some kind of king!
The poem otherwise, is a well thought lashed to any lazy brain.

Georg

Reviewed on September 11, 2008
Good thoughts here, Bonnie; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 10, 2008
I can't even afford that old back woods shack, but could I maybe rent the outhouse, then I can sublet the place for those who need to use it...;-) e

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 10, 2008
well written food for thought

Reviewed on September 10, 2008
All we need to do is count the blessings around us, not counting treasures that have no meaning...well done, Bonnie, love that house. Wouldn't mind living there, as long as there was a basement, under. LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on September 10, 2008
Lovingly expressed and complete. Nice rhyme. Priorities are important. Cheers

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 10, 2008
How did you get a photograph of my dream home? Yup, I would give it all up and have for God and a good man to spend my life with. Kind of write that really hits home...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by S Phillips
Reviewed on September 10, 2008
Oh, to have such love. NIce Write!

Reviewed by Queen Of The Pen
Reviewed on September 10, 2008
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem. I can relate to your message as love, not "things", is what makes for true happiness. Keep writing such wonderful prose.

Reviewed on September 10, 2008
You are right, Bonnie!!! I know a few super rich people (not my friends) that are very lonely and very very unhappy, the ones they want to have aren't interested in them, and yet the ones they didn't want throw themselves on them in dozen.

Sad indeed!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on September 10, 2008
You are so right, my friend! :~) We may not have much material wise, but my family is priceless!
Cryssa


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