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Release Me From My Shackles
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How many times do we ask, "Why did God let this happen?"


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Release Me From My Shackles

 

“Why did you abandon me is what I hear you say?”

“Why have you forsaken me, why did you go away?”

“Oh, I am here my child, not once did I ever leave.”

“I was there for all the pain as I watched you grieve.”

 

“It is you who abandoned me, as I waited here for you.”

“You took me out of your schools, as your children grew.”

“You’re trying to remove me from your currency with me still here.”

“You’re taking me out of Christmas in all your Xmas cheer.”

 

“No, my precious child, it’s not me who wasn’t there for you.”

“For I’ve kept all my promises, it’s something I always do.”

“It is you who have left my safety and my tender loving care.”

“Always going on without me in your defiance & your dares.”

 

“So my children don’t blame me for your world’s dismay.”

“Because I’ve been right here waiting, every single day.”

“If just once you’d free me from the shackles that I bear.”

“I would be right there to show you, just how much I care.”

 

Written by,

Bonnie May


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 Reviews of "Release Me From My Shackles"
Reviewed by Tony Jenkins
Reviewed on December 4, 2008
If we put our mind to it, we are in charge of our own desiny.

Take care Tony

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 2, 2008
we are the lost sheep who continually test His love -- Linda Law and Southern Comfort have so accurately assessed the situation as it exists today -- peace and love to you Bonnie -- JMW

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
We who love and trust HIM know that this is exactly why the world is going to hell in a handbasket... yet.... they remain clueless as Southern Comfort below has stated... you got it right girl. lindalaw

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
From your carin heart and mind to the eyes of a clueless world. May this wonderful write open some eyes and some hearts! LOVE YOU! SC

Reviewed on November 29, 2008
Bonnie you have strong spiritual convictions and I like people when what they say matches with what they do.

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
This is SO well-written, Bonnie, you could sell this one to a religious magazine, I love it.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Hi Bonnie,this is such a beautiful and touching poem.I hope you had a nice Thanksgiving like I did :-),take care

Love and Hugs
Edwin

Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Bonnie,

An excellent write, my dear. He can, and will - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Keep your beliefs strong...e

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
...what honest reality your words give us...and yet...He still cares.
beautiful write Bonnie...
John

Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Bonnie,

What a special gift you have - a very meritorious penning!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Just beautiful, Bonnie; well done! BRAVA!

Merry Christmas to you and yours; may it be your best one EVER!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Very inspirational, Bonnie!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Bonnie your spirit is ever present to
guide us to truth! A superb poem!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Powerful and oh so true. Your poetry shines with God's grace

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Wonderful writing sweet Bonnie,and yes I agree I ask all the time...sorry I have been so busy with my work and other matters just dont have time for too much these days,will be away for awhile..please stay safe and well always sweet lady...Hugssss,much love too you..see you soon...

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
How sad! yes, how sad that we don't understand that the world our children are inheriting will be the cause of their complain!

Georg


Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Bingo, Bonnie!!! This poem should strike some nerves here and there. You know, every time I see a picture of Jesus, with the spikes and thorns and the gaping wound in his side, I am offended that we are asked to celebrate Roman torture methods; I am offended because of this attempt to distract us from the reality of what Jesus did for us, what God does for us, and I am offended because this horrible distraction pushes us away from hugging Jesus. This is a brilliant poem, Bonnie :-)

Ted

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
“So my children don’t blame me for your world’s dismay.�

Something I think far too many of us do, today. Our world truly is what each of us chooses to make it.


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