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Old Age
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Nothing like it, nothing at all.


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Old Age

 

As we age many of our body parts that were once sound.

Even one ones that worked so well are now shutting down.

We can’t see as well and our teeth prevent us from enjoying food.

Looking in the mirror our skin turns ugly when we are in the nude.

 

Our faces fall and hair gets thin with each and every year that pass.

Our hearts grow weak and arteries are blocked with a cholesterol mass.

Our joints wear out and cause us problems when we try to get around.

In fact not many body parts work well and most become unsound.

 

The pain at times becomes intense just sitting in our chair.

It becomes so hard to live and life just doesn’t seem fair.

Our minds grow dim and we forget what yesterday used to be.

I think this is the saddest of all, I think most of you agree.

 

But one thing I refuse to give away is the spirit in my soul.

For that is what keeps me going, that’s what makes me whole.

So age can have my eyesight, my heart and all the other parts of me.

But I refuse to give old age my spirit until God sets me free.

 

Written by,

Bonnie May

 

 

 


 

 


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 Reviews of "Old Age"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on January 13, 2009
You are so right... That is what makes older people so wonderful...they don't care about their looks anymore or about pleasing other people. They are totally themselves with no pretenses.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 11, 2009
Bonnie, our spirits brighten with age -- and they glow brightly within our eyes -- peace,love and joy to you -- JMW

Reviewed by Evelyn Wineski (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2009
You really are writing about ME!! I'm 62 going on 80. We need to go back to the gym.
Love you
Evie

Reviewed on January 10, 2009
BRAVO!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on January 10, 2009
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on January 9, 2009
Bonnie,
I UNDERSTAND this poem, for I feel like I'm 90 sometimes! Yes, one day God will call us home and we'll all be whole again! No pain, no sadness!

Blessings and love,
~Linda

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on January 9, 2009
We who are THERE....certainly understood the words in your poem... too true! Like I say...When I finally do go...I'll still be kickin'.... I know that's why HE saves me for last.... like..."I'm not ready for this gal yet!"........... cool poem, but too true darn it.. hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 9, 2009
Bravo and Amen! you keep the most important part, sweet lady who loves the Lord! Age cannot lessen the spirit, only God can! Superb poem!

Eileen

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 9, 2009
Doc Bonnie can cure any kind of blues, you ain't goin' no place until the tickets Boss gives you one.

one of the Ed brothers


Reviewed on January 8, 2009
Hello Bonnie May,

Such sheer determination to start the new year!!!! Wonderful!
(Nice photo)
Cynthia

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
A writing of defiiance...of the thing we can never control, OLD AGE!
I love your fiesty...not givin up your spirit!!!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
You know you're never suppose to tell your age,
let alone feel your age ;) I hope that's true...

Reviewed on January 8, 2009
How did you get my piccy?!? all I wanna know. LOL A precious, priceless write, very well done, Bonnie!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
YOU Are Only As Old As You Feel,i.e. I Somehow Made It To 18 But Never Got Past 23...PROOF: No One But Nobody Believes My Real Earth Age...

TRASK



Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
Hey, old Girl, don't be writing about me like that. I hear you, sister, and I'm glad I kept reading to the end of this one. I'm with you, too. And you know, I've heard about oldsters who never spoke anymore, and lived in nursing homes, but when hymns were sung, they joined in. That's the spirit from God. Glory to His Name!
love, your sis, Connie
p.s. the best comment here is Ed Matlack's. So funny.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
Good plan of attack Bonnie. Let's hope he doesn't call for it for a very long time, you would be too missed here on the den.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
Oh Bonnie, this was just great! You've painted such a canvas here for us "seniors" today. I'm determined "not" to allow old age to strip me of my dignity...I'll fight until the end too. An enjoyable write.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
I am aging right along with you Bonnie, Cannot enjoy eating nuts and some foods I love, but still try to anyway. I do feel so old some days, then another day I feel younger. It all depends on what you do to counteract the aging. Take care and make yourself believe in yourself still and that you are a beautiful person on the inside and on the outside too. God never lets us down, he loves us whatever our shape or heart does. Forgiveness is for all too.

Reviewed on January 8, 2009
Excellent write Bonnie, but as my Nonna used to say you are only as old as you feel! Thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
This is so true of old age...some, it creeps upon quicker than another, but it's a for sure. I love your last line. Praise God Bonnie! love Holly

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
At times the mind is willing
But the flesh is week
like you see something you think
you might be capable of accomplishing
(physical that is)
And you jut can't.....what a downer
reality sinks in
Love & peace be with you

WilliAM

Reviewed on January 8, 2009
Bonnie~!

Fantastically clever . . . superlative all the way!! Great image too!!


LOve and Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
This one rocks!!! Sweetie, I do not care if you get to be 190 years old and every part of you is on life-support -- you will still be young at heart and charming us with your poems :-)

Ted

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
Amen to that, for a heart that is young, in a body that is weathered, still gives you life to live to the fullest.

Reviewed on January 8, 2009
Great write, Bonnie; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
You really should wear a bit of make-up when you get your picture like the one above taken...;-) ed


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