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Folks Don't Understand Fifteen
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For my son, Joe

Folks Don’t Understand Fifteen


 


 I always knew my folks didn’t understand.


They overlooked my most amazing, music plans


And told me more than not that I didn’t have a chance.


 


Everything I liked they labeled wrong.


They closed their ears on the first line of my songs.


Kept saying that road was tough and I wouldn’t last long.


 


They had the nerve to say I couldn’t sing.


To this day I still can feel the vacuum of that sting,


And now I wonder if my creed, “I can’t,” began then, when I was fifteen.


 


It’s not the creed, my son, that I would choose for you.


Well, that's okay, from fifteen your creed will change a time or two.


But now looking back I see they only meant “follow through.”


And that is all I want to say to you.


 


It’s not the dreaming part of it that’s wrong.


It’s now I know how truly a dreamless life is long.


I wish that I could loan you now, the words to write your song. 


 


 I anticipate your maturity like fine wine allowed to breathe.


For now you want to boil water without fire underneath.


You want to believe that blood can come from rocks.


You want to tick your time without the tocks.


 


You can’t live your dreams without your waking truth.


If I could I’d make your dreams come true for you


But I can’t build a ship to sail with no sailcloth or wood,


Or even sing a song of you better than you could.


 


What I can do is urge you to keep dreaming big


And when you are my grown up child I know that you can rig


A plane to fly or a boat that’s worthy to sail the open seas


Or take you anywhere anytime, to any dream  you please.


 


Kathy Adams


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 Reviews of "Folks Don't Understand Fifteen"
Reviewed on January 22, 2008
This hit home with me. When my son was a teenager, (he's 28 now), all he could talk about was his music. I also told him he would go nowhere and couldn't live off of that. He was in several bands, never made it big. But he now gives private lessons to others and owns a music store. He has several pieces he's written on Myspace.
Maybe music is for you, maybe it's not. Try and keep your dreams alive.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 22, 2008
Sometimes biting words can stay with us for a very long time, one should think before they speak, well done piece with much emotion running through....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
i must agree there is much power in these words that parents need to pay heed too. i can relate this write to my own children and their teen years.

randy

Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Kathy,

Powerfully penned...parents don't understand that words affect one's decisions years later...I know. Was told when I was younger I wouldn't amount to anything...

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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