We walk many miles in silence and listened to nature, birds and crickets chirped as the sun warmed the damp day.
With one glance at each other words we wanted to say fell wayside to eyes that saw reflections of desire awake, willed by intuition we reached for each other.
You held my chin in the palm of your hand and kissed me with love penetrating my fear. The intensity sheared a flare of white light and in that moment of birth, "we" became "us".
Light that was white now shimmered with fiery ambers, swirling slowly lifting us to a place above the stars. It was there, we were freed to love with our all.
Great poetry. I love the "we became us" line. Nicely done.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2004
Tracey,
This is stunning the moment of surreal surrender the moment of two as one the us awesome piece Lady Of Heart......
LP
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2004
This is absolutely beautiful, Poet!!! You have raised the bar quite high with this magnificent piece of poetry!!! Great job!!! Powerfully emotive!!! Thank you for your kind and gracious words, Tracey. Now I’ll be allowed to have a glass of wine legally…lol. Keep The Faith, Poet.
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
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Poetic beauty beyond imagination - super!
Robert
enjoyed the pic
but your words whew
sexy
This is stunning the moment of surreal surrender the moment of two as one the us awesome piece Lady Of Heart......
LP
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