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Out Patient
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Out Patient

7:03 am
ahead of schedule
I sit - in silence.

7:30 finally,
lights on in
the waiting room

eyes-slits closed
trying to shut-out-light
like a full closet ajar,

a sleepless night
of pins and needles

war
between
claustrophobia
and MRI.

receptionist
shuffles papers
lining up paper patients
in white uniforms

people pass,
guessing me
through sips of
coffee


 
  
   


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 Reviews of "Out Patient"
Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on August 24, 2005
Nice "slice of life" write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 24, 2005
Very well written!!

Hope you are okay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on August 24, 2005
Tracey,

You capture the terror perfectly. I, too, am claustrophobic...and the wait is torture, knowing what awaits...well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2005
11:34 pm Still waiting in the NHS..

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on August 24, 2005
i too know this scene too well, mri...? are you okay? i'm claustrophobic so the thought of an mri sends me into panic and i felt that way reading your words. excellent depiction

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 24, 2005
Excellent capture...hope all is well!I know this scene too well...

Eileen

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 24, 2005
I know this well Tracey unfortunately.
Don't care for the hosptials but hey
an out patient is better than never
know when patient. lol Great write.


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