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The Tune of Another Time
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The Tune of Another Time Enchanted by what the band played lament sounds carried by the wind slow movements of thoughts swayed. Time spiraled to transcend back in time to yester years, thoughts of, there would be no end. Moments spent drinking ice cold beer as summer days fell to warm nights, we languished holding each other near. Smiles followed by whispers of delight of silly thoughts and endless fears, lead our hearts to embrace and to unite. Gazing back once more into the years seeing things for what they were I could no longer hold back the tears. Emotions churned and stirred, reality bought me back into time to the song I no longer heard. My thoughts reeled to this crime for silence filled my troubled mind, how I wished to stay back in that time! Now I must journey forward blind seeking to find another soul to hold my heart steadfast entwined. If only the sounds would become whole I would not then become a lost soul! Copyright 2002 Tracey L. Hardie

This was my 1st attepmt at using this format of Terza Rima with ending couplet. This was also written for a poetry challenge to write a poem that flowed with music without using the words, love, desire, passion, music, dance, melody, or harmony.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

very good!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

More beer, please. Liked this Tracey.

Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)

This really is a great example of peotic form. The meter and ryhme are fantastic. Great thoughts as well.
Drkman

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Wonderful rhyme and meter enwrapping gorgeous thoughts. Bravissimo.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Yes Tracey, this poem touches the heart so deeply. I can feel your anguish when no sound is left. No song is playing and it is time for you to move on. I cried.
Bill Murray.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on December 4, 2002

Tracey,
What can I say that the others haven't, besides this one touches the heart!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Beautiful write Tracey! Very nice pic.
Jack

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll

Very good write Tracey, a good romantic flow

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Really a fantastic write with such romantic longing.
Amor

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Softly romantic, just lovely, Tracey.