Untitled (poem) by Mitzi Kay Jackson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

I can't express how fantastic this is but it is ! Keep them coming

Reviewed on January 30, 2003

Hi Mitzi...intensely powerful poem. Well written.

Reviewed by Anwer Sher (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2003

the weave of this poem is intense and powerful.. halting the reader to absorb each word and the way lovely way it carries a passion with it.. put together and we have this brilliant poem..

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on January 19, 2003

Hi Mitzi...
Fantastic message...
Super write...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2003

Just exceptional, Mitzi. You are greatly missed.

Reviewed by Timothy Foley (Reader)

Reviewed on January 2, 2003

Magnificently profound. Poigniant and hard-hitting, this should be published!

Reviewed by Afrika Abney

Reviewed on December 6, 2002

Wow. What a profound write and message. Makes one stop to think.Great write and thanks for sharing this with us.

Afrika M.A.Abney

Reviewed by Angela Velez (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2002

your words couldn't be any deeper
so true

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on November 21, 2002

well done

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2002

powerful, moving...absorbing write. **Mari**

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on November 17, 2002

Great write!

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on November 14, 2002

Excellent! Amen on that publishing idea! You are UNIQUE and write extremely interesting poetry. Well done!

Reviewed by J Michael Kearney

Reviewed on November 8, 2002

This is really quite beautiful. A great economy with words and a wonderful cadence. // Fine writing!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2002

Wow girl, this is really good. You have a couple of spelling errors, but this is priceless. I hope you are thinking about being published !!! ~E

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2002

TRULY a VOICE of WISDOM to BALANCE the MEANS to EVERY ones ENDS! SEEING is BELIEVING with EYES that WON�T lie!
VERY EXCELLENT WORK!

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on October 24, 2002

Good message!

Love, JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2002

So powerfully written, full of emotion...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 23, 2002

Great powerful write indeed Mitzi!!!!! 10+ for this one!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Victor Jensen

Reviewed on October 23, 2002

It's so comeforting just to know he watches us. -- Vic

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on October 23, 2002

Excellent way Mitzi... without hope we would all be lost!

Reviewed by Mike Ill (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2002

this one fell off somewhere for me...can't exactly pinpoint it...it's still better than most of the stuff on AD

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

10-22-02

As Long As You(We) Are In This Physical (Hell)
World You As Little Children Will Suffer__

Just Gotta Make The Best Of What You Got & Never StrayFrom Path (God) Has Placed You On__

Your Just Rewards Are Not In Or Of this World.

Your Friend, TRASK

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

Yours words are very clever and astute and you are sound in your reasoning. And I am convoluted in my Soul and can't fimd my way. May I join in the fun? Bill

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

Loved this!! Thank you..
Jenni

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

Very profound piece of writing Mitzi

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

Great poem, Mitzi. Yes, we all need to find our way. Loved the last lines:

stop!!!!!!!!! you damn fool
stop!!!!!!!!! killing stop hurting you!!!!!
your not him..........he is watching

We have to stop playing God.