I created called this structure called The Reverb This structure has four stanzas . The first two stanzas of the poem make a statement on any theme or topic . The last two stanzas of the poem are an opposite to the theme of the first two stanzas .
Doubt No More
1
With real love something’s never change .
I embrace it and accept it into my heart as the mystery unfolds .
We need to believe and accept the mystery of life and love ,
before we begin to destroy all the moulds .
2
Because I can accept the way it is without wanting to change it ,
My life is an uncomplicated bliss .
I accept how things are,
I have the courage to look at reality and then all of my doubts are dismissed.
3
You need to be rough and tough to survive these days . Flexibility and understanding is just not enough .
Before I can trust myself to love you ,
You need to prove to me that your feelings for me are not just a bluff .
4
I can never trust anyone or anything . Love has me blinded and bluffed.
Nobody will fool me again .
I doubt if I will ever fall in love again,
yet I am still looking out for someone.
Isn’t it a shame .
The first two are the way things need to fit in the puzzle of life, but for most it's the last two that seem to take to the stage.
A very thought provoking write here Paul.
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A very thought provoking write here Paul.
Lisa