"I looked in the mirror.
Life was drawing on my face.
Happiness and sorrows,
Lines engraved,
My own moments
Lost in time,
Deep experiences
Dug in my skin."
This was short but filling. You have rich lines like, " Life was drawing on my face" and "Deep experiences Dug in my skin." With vivid descriptions like this you don't need to say much. Bravo!
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D