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The Visit
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The Visit

shutting our eyes we see the moment,
the door opening, the car shut down.
he emerges fresh, though the drive
over mountains fatigued softly,
like a morning mist settling
on copper before turning green.
any dust he flicks off his shoulders
encased in polyester sweats,
a style suited for long trips,
autumn’s chill, winter’s
cringing cold.
he grips our hands, claps backs,
a football coach greeting lost teammates
after twenty years of mold.
into the house we go,
he pausing by the porch swing,
one swift memory of summer song,
of girls held tight
at midnight’s hour.
inside we grab hotdogs and beer,
the laughter muted by years
we never shared.

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 Reviews of "The Visit"
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 23, 2004
Beautiful envelopes of life. I can smell the moist ground of a footbal evening and hear the crowd...smell the moon.
Superb.
Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
Great write with a punch at the end!!

"inside we grab hotdogs and beer,
the laughter muted by years
we never shared. "

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
really nice write

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
"like a morning mist settling
on copper before turning green" <--- great line

Wonderful expression here, Larry. And a very nice finish. Thank you.

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
I felt this through the subtext...a bittersweet reunion so visually described...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
Very intense ending!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
Great write. I love the ending...

"the laughter muted by years
we never shared."

Excellent lines!

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
wow, this is great...was it your father or older brother...or none of my business LOL either way the poem is good


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