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Triage
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Triage

not one of us was hurt,
the car’s bent frame
leaning heavily over the edge,
its exhaust still sputtering
a putt-putt tune,
windshield wipers furiously
beating a window
completely cracked, gone,
yet
wipers flailed at invisible
water droplets,
and ambulances arrived
on the bridge, bright red lights,
seen for miles,
reflected off dark waters
down the bayou toward
the smell of fish, but we leaned on
pillows of light cast
against the police
car, a dark shroud of hope,
our quest for life saved
to breathe through
oxygen masks,
not so much for life,
not so much for fear,
but mostly for our
conception, and we
thanked out mothers
for giving birth,
thanked our fathers for that
life spurt that might have
but didn’t crack this tumbling
night, our own car
flipped over
in murky water.

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 Reviews of "Triage"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
powerful and well written ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
Fantastic images Larry, knowing you do drama so well I don't feel like it is about you. Just very dynamic poetry!

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
Larry--I am really enjoying your writes. Your visuals are always wonderful.
P.S. Hope this was fiction. :) and if it wasn't--glad you are okay and writing!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
wow. this is excellent, Larry. it could work in a number of different ways. great metaphor here. Dawn

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
Wild N Good Off the Wall Write!

TRASK

Reviewed on November 23, 2004
larry,

if this is fictional, it breathes real life and crackling danger through the power of your imagery and words. i hope you're okay if this isn't fictional.

excellent write--happy thanksgiving to you and yours

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(


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