"Come and drink my Moonwish.."
she gazed into his eyes and wondrous sights you will be shown and I shall be your prize. Come wander round my tent with me
and see how rested you can be
..amidst its sultry luxury. The man was sorely tempted, he gazed into her face
a beauty rare, green almond eyes were shielded by black lace. A purple cloak around her form
it shone with stars of gold... her parted lips and quickened breath
spoke pleasures yet untold. She pressed the goblet to his lips
he wanted what he saw,
her sylph-like body close to his
she led him through a door. Purest silk and swirling shapes his mind began to whirl,
he gazed around this lush boudoir and then he spied the girl. The cloak was gone
her hair hung loose,
it hung down to her waist,
a sacred fruit within her hands,
she offered him a taste.. "Come eat of this my handsome man"
and then she teased him with her fan. Eyes downcast now she slipped away - He knew there was a game to play "Surrender's sweet my love, I'm yours,
You've played my game..
now I am yours."
Come take my hand for pleasure's sweet,
and I shall leave you so replete."
She placed his hand upon her thighs and gazed at him with greenest eyes.
"Come drink of me, the stars are bright, Our souls entwine this sacred night.
Enchantment will embrace your mind,
A gift not seen by humankind,
And excitations just for you Beyond your wildest dreams...
Tis true !
We'll lie upon the Milky Way
and make sweet music all the way."
They shared a night of total bliss, she blew away his mind, And Moonbeams blazed upon their souls Deep secrets they did find.. Young woman wanders every night..
She knows she is a dish.. For unsuspecting hungry males Come....taste of her Moonwish!
THIS WORK IS SO PROVOKING, I CAN'T RESIST...I MUST GO THERE;
I'M STILL COUNTING THE BROKEN HEARTS
OF THE NUMEROUS BODY PARTS...LEFT BEHIND
YES, NOT ONLY MEN...PLAY THIS WICKED PART
BUT WOMEN TOO LEAVE A TRAIL...NOT HARD TO FIND
WITH TATTERED REMAINS FROM FREE IMPART
ENTICED BY...MOONWISH...SO SELFISHLY ENTWINED
A GREAT POETIC SHARING, INDEED. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2016
I missed this one and so I read...Excellent, Diana!
What a beautiful poem this is!! Written solely for the two people in the poem: Of the chanced moment they have met under the moonlit sky; and the mesmerizing moments that they have shared together in love and ecstasy. Beautiful write indeed!!
Sandie
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2014
What an enchanting poem, so full of color, texture, mystery, delight, enticement, and as your readers say, mesmerizing in its lyric and meter. Pat Medlin says it; once begun, must finish. Now THAT's a good piece of writing! ~~ Diana
You've blown me away with this one, Diana. I simply love its rhyme and rhythm. I've read it twice already, and I'm reading it again once I've written this note of appreciation for a job well done. It's...it's...its simply amazing how this piece draws the reader in.
One of your best works, Diana...one could slip so easily through the wall to evade this temptation than to even try to survive it. Magnificent work!
Amor
PS
I'M STILL COUNTING THE BROKEN HEARTS
OF THE NUMEROUS BODY PARTS...LEFT BEHIND
YES, NOT ONLY MEN...PLAY THIS WICKED PART
BUT WOMEN TOO LEAVE A TRAIL...NOT HARD TO FIND
WITH TATTERED REMAINS FROM FREE IMPART
ENTICED BY...MOONWISH...SO SELFISHLY ENTWINED
A GREAT POETIC SHARING, INDEED. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
Always,
Deborah
Mary
Sandie
Take me where
You "MoonWish"
Bluemoonwish Hulk part two right?
Enjoyed this wonderful poem very much...waiting on part two dear friend! Please make it just as seductive...if you know what we mean??
Giggles and hugs..
Love ya
Teresa
For most men, the closest they would ever get to such a fantasy would be a wet dream.
Ron
Love ya!
Jane
Hugs,
David
Amor
budd
Regis
Let me be the first to say I would do a moon walk for some Moonwish!
Hotsy totsy!