Remembering a lazy Sunny Afternoon by the River with my Love...
Me and you....Trapped In A Time Warp...
Nestled into the crook of your neck,
Benign warmth from an intuitive Sun
gently caressing my eyelids,
I feel like a child again,
safe and secure within your strong
and capable arms.
The lapping, lazy River entrances my mellow gaze,
Sunlight skipping happily
like a playful child over the gentle movement
of the waves, delighting my open senses.
The Grecian steps where we choose to sit,
Hot and warming...
In perfect harmony with our inner desires...
Your eyes seek mine once more,
and I melt to my inner core,
Luxuriating in the waves of love and want that envelop
the totality of my being...
The hazy horizon beckons yet again,
Always drawing me to thoughts further afield,
an apt metaphor for my fluid inner self....
And you beside me, loving and tender,
an integral thread of this wondrous process..
Can this bliss last forever?
Frozen fast within the Hands of Time,
You, Me, the Steps, the River,
Warmth and Security, Desire and Mystery
Flowing like the tranquil waters before us...
You..and Me,...just You and Me...
Trapped in a Time Warp
of sheer and utter Perfection.....
ALONG LIFE'S PATH...WE ARE BLESSED TO PARTAKE OF THE MARVELOUS WONDERS AND REALITIES OF LOVE. AND WE DELVE INTO IT...WANTING IT TO NEVER END. FOR SOME, THEY ARE GIFTED WITH A LIFE-LONG PARTNER AND THE ROMANCE NEVER ENDS. BUT FOR OTHERS...IT DOESN'T WORK OUT THAT WAY, BEING JUST FOR A TIME. IT IS THEN THAT THAT OLD ROMANTIC CLICHE' FALLS INTO PLACE BEAUTIFULLY; '...BETTER TO HAVE LOVED AND LOST, THEN NEVER TO HAVE LOVED AT ALL...' HOWEVER, FOR YOU I AM WILLING TO WAGER THAT IT HAD TO BE REAL, DIANA...YOUR WORDS EXPRESS THIS, ENTIRELY. AN INDELIBLE SHARING, THANKS. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
This is one of the most beautiful love poems that I have ever read. This kind of love cannot be manufactured. It is the kind of love that poured out of the heart and soul. This is the purest kind of love. This one is a treasure.
Wow, you took us to a place of utter perfection and bliss.
Wonderfully penned dear Diana, Happy Mothers Day if your a mom
and take care, much love, Vie.
Very insightful writing. Sharing these private moments has to be humbling and I wonder, did it last forever? If not, I know it was the most difficult to let go, as it seems to be a match made in heaven. Nicely expressed emotions and visions. I feel warm ...
Having read the beauty of your poetry in days past, I find that only a heart as tender as yours is capable of casting, what I shall call, a "poetic spell" on your readers. Further, it's as though two souls have melded perfectly into one—one that will continue throughout eternity. Thank you, Diana, for baring your inner feelings. This piece is absolutely breathtaking.
Wowzers! To get trapped in a Time Warp when all that was going on. I haven't been there yet, but when I do--or when We do--I am gonna slam on the brakes and chill out for an era or two. Great write, Diana.
It seems "this bliss will last forever", now that you have immortalized it in this finely wrought poem. As Jane said, the imagery is spot on and the wording precise and unique, not to mention the sentiments that touch anyone with a heart. Finely penned. John
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
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ALONG LIFE'S PATH...WE ARE BLESSED TO PARTAKE OF THE MARVELOUS WONDERS AND REALITIES OF LOVE. AND WE DELVE INTO IT...WANTING IT TO NEVER END. FOR SOME, THEY ARE GIFTED WITH A LIFE-LONG PARTNER AND THE ROMANCE NEVER ENDS. BUT FOR OTHERS...IT DOESN'T WORK OUT THAT WAY, BEING JUST FOR A TIME. IT IS THEN THAT THAT OLD ROMANTIC CLICHE' FALLS INTO PLACE BEAUTIFULLY; '...BETTER TO HAVE LOVED AND LOST, THEN NEVER TO HAVE LOVED AT ALL...' HOWEVER, FOR YOU I AM WILLING TO WAGER THAT IT HAD TO BE REAL, DIANA...YOUR WORDS EXPRESS THIS, ENTIRELY. AN INDELIBLE SHARING, THANKS. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
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Wonderfully penned dear Diana, Happy Mothers Day if your a mom
and take care, much love, Vie.
Cryssa
Hugs,
David
Unique integral thread of open senses!
Delightfully penned!
Lady Mary Ann
Regis
Love ya!
Jane