Wow, that last line is so deep sista! I love it!!! I agree that we have to break free of those mental chains is we are truly going to live in freedom. I put it this way, save nothing because you can't save your own life you just have to spend it the best way possible because it is all we have on this Earth that's truly worth something everday we wake up. Again, Powerful Piece & Write on My Sista!
This poem reflects the truth about the self-defeating mind, and the way ones social environment may play a role in molding and breeding this mental prison. Some people are serving life sentences, and others are on death row may I add as a comment. Very well done Lavendar Jazz.
very well done Lavendar Jazz...
John
I keep myself busy to stay out
of the prison you speak of.
Excellent, thoughtful, poem.
Ron
Powerfully penned - excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.