Bastard Freak (poem) by Lavendar Jazz on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 19, 2011

You have the right name to this one Janice, sorry I've missed your site before. Great expression within your words.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Blue Sleighty

Reviewed on May 21, 2008

Great work. I feel you.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Powerful, gripping. Outstanding write, Lavender.

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on April 23, 2008

You delivered with a most powerful pen exquisite memories of undeserved pain and revulsion.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on April 22, 2008

Oh Lavender
You Write This Out!
Let It Out, is this person around still? Cause I tell you what...going to their house & actin a fool <------that be me. Is Fantastic FREEEDOM!!!!!
The Empowerments of letting their secret loose Is Unexplainable & Wonderful
& Then Fly The Salute Finger!!!
Ahhhh Fly 2!!!
Love & Safe Hugs
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

This is a very sensitive and yet thought provoking. That SOB deserves to be tortured for days prior to having the dirt thrown in his face. I can feel your pain amidst your words. Well penned.

Sanja xo

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

Wow so very deeply painful and soooo sad!!
As my eyes danced from top to bottom of page
I felt your pain and your disgust!
Your poem brought tears to my eyes
Outstanding writing!!
Peace Love and Hugssss....Morning star

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Dep and terribly painful sentiments depicted here. A rare write of real life

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

I can't stand sick people like this and you are right their rewards will be waiting for them in the pits of hell. Great poem!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Anyone who touches a child in their "secret places" has no right to exist in my eyes; they are lower than dirt!! Hearrbreaking write; all I can do is pray for him (and the child whose life he ruined)! Sick world we live in today!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 15, 2008

Interesting topic, "best friends dad was not so nice", sometimes dad's are not so nice either....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2008

I feel your pain,stay safe and well sweet lady...Hugsssss..much love to you

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 15, 2008

(((Lavendar))),

I can't imagine - how awful! Anyone that touches a child inappropriately ceases to be human in my eyes - pain, brutally expressed.

(((((HUGS))))), love and prayer, Karla. :(