Lonely Bird (poem) by Lavendar Jazz on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

This is beautiful, for in its sadness, there is hope!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

I hope this bird will have her wing fixed and find a soul mate.. Keep writing!.Blessings.......M

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

Awesome, don't know what style, but you got my heart!

Reviewed by Janice Beaty Hamilton

Reviewed on April 23, 2008

Beautifully written... Blessings, Janice

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 23, 2008

this is a beautiful capture, Lavender J. It brings such a sorrowful poignancy and yet a resurgent optimism... that dream deferred. Birds of course, cannot stay "lonely" for long... of a feather, they flock together! And the songbird cannot stay sad for too long. The miracle is in the swiftness with which bird wings mends. At least, I certainly hope so! Thank you for this vulnerable, thoughtful piece. Kate xx

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on April 23, 2008

May this little bird be up and flying soon,, singing a song,, following a dream!!!!
Christine

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on April 23, 2008

Excellent capture, with pathos.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 23, 2008

Quite sad, but powerfully penned.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 22, 2008

Excellent! Succinct,but speaks volumes,very nicely done!

ET

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 22, 2008

Awww, sounds more like someone is so very down and needs a little TLC to be nursed back to strength and life....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 22, 2008

(((Lavander))),

Hope your wing mends soon - your sadness, evident in these lines born from hurt - you're in my prayers. An excellent write in few words convey the poignancy.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 22, 2008

Very well penned, Lavender; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on April 22, 2008

Tenderly Expressed Poem Lavender,

in the tenderness of love your wing will mend
embraced sorrows will know comforts in the heart of love
& we all shall sing

Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2008

This different for you, I liked it...I checked out your paintings that you posted. My favorite is the dancer great colors

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2008

Very nice writing sweet lady...Hugsssssssssssss

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels

Reviewed on April 22, 2008

Nice work.....I enjoyed the read...