coward (poem) by RICHARD SERRANO on AuthorsDen

coward
by RICHARD SERRANO → (All Poetry by RICHARD SERRANO)
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ARE YOU SOMEKIND OF A COWARD? SCARED TO TAKE POSITIVE STEPS FORWARD CAN’T FIGHT IN LOVE’S BATTLE? WANT TO RUN, WANT TO SKEDADDLE? AFRAID YOU MIGHT WIN? CAN’T DEAL WITH THE RESPONSIBILITY THAT COMES FROM WITHIN, DON’T HAVE THE DISCIPLINE? WHAT’S THE MATTER, LOVE TOO RUFF YOU NOT AS TUFF, AS YOU BELIEVE’ LOVES GAME NOT THAT… EASY? WANT TO RUN HOME TO MAMA? SHUT YOUR EYES TO LOVES DRAMA NEED SOME WARM MILK IN A BOTTLE?SOMETHING TO PUSH YOUR MINDS THROTTLE WANT TO FILL YOUR HEAD WITH A SMOKEY SUBSTANCE? IN HOPES OF CLEARING YOUR MINDS TURBULANCE DO YOU HAVE THE COURAGE TO FIGHT THE FIGHT THAT WILL GIVE YOU LOVES SACRED RIGHTS ARE YOU READY FOR THE LANDING? OR WILL LOVE FLY BY AND LEAVE YOU ALONE STANDING- COWARD! STILL SCARED TO MOVE FORWARD? R.Serrano

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

Good Morning Richard,
your passion evokes the frustration of what is indeed a reality for some debilitated by fear
emotive write
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 28, 2008

A wonderful write with a great message, has a great lyrical feel...well done! Oh yeah, welcome to the den!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

Very deeply moving, you have made a point and with passion and conviction you send it home.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 24, 2008

Running isn't cowardice is the ownership of very fast legs, you can't tell them to stop once they start pumping, even if you have a lions heart and a mucho macho actitude, don't call man a coward for running call him a road-runner because there's a coyoye coming up his tail beep-beep...beep-beep

Georg

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 23, 2008

Great Write Cus
Sometimes I felt as if my feet were stuck in deep mud
When the Mind was willing but the flesh was weak.
Outstanding presentation
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Sending chills throughout....

Be always safe,
Karen