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Spinning In My Mind
by Jessi Stelter → (All Poetry by Jessi Stelter)
  
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Everything spinning in my head,
Are all the thoughts that can not be said,
Then you lead me through the door,
Dreams are spiraling again once more.

And through these eyes,
I found my heart upon the floor,
Exactly where you left it before.
And it is that in which I miss,
That blew through the trees adrift.

Yet this throbbing pain within my heart,
Is the one that’s tearing me apart,
But some how I knew from the start,
That I could never make it,
So why pretend,
To make amends,
When I can ascend,
And meet you in the end.

And through the skies, the constellations,
With all there beauty in formation,
Though upon the peoples face,
Lies a hint of manifestation.

And since the beginning of creation,
We were faced with temptation,
Thrown upon those who sin,
Who’ve buried there worst within.
A mortal wound upon their skin,
Though its stretched so very thin,

Upon my face there is a grin,
As my soul dwells with in.
And there’s no point in salvation,
As now’s the time for the final transformation.






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 Reviews of "Spinning In My Mind"
Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on August 17, 2002
thanks for the spinning trip through your mind
enjoyable ride

Reviewed by Justin Wolf (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2002
I like this poem. It has that certain random conformity, to use an oxymoron, that I think is soemtimes nice. Thoughts very rarely ever continue in one direction. The one thing that gets me is the rhyme scheme here seems a bit like a bicycle wobbling out of control. You get it back at times, but after the first 2 stanzas it starts. Bravo.


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