Hope (poem) by Phyllis Jean Green on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on December 20, 2004

Hi Phyllis:

What a powerful dark image you have painted here, it is so sad and true. A well-written piece.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Thank you, Phyllis, for such powerful, lucid and vivid poem. The message conveyed is just beautiful.

Congratulations from me, too, and all the very best for a New Year filled with wondrous moments and creativity.

Gina

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

And,One Mere Thought Of (God) Ends It All_

You Cannot Hope Wish Nor Pray,but You Can Make Best Of What You Have Got Left Today By Sharing It With A Little Child (USA) Today,i.e Make Your Amends!

TRASK

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Vivid imagery here Pea. Heartbreaking. Michelle

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

pea this is marvelous. A wonderful offering. Congrats on the
publication, well deserved!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

I love this, particularly the last verse which is most symbolic of never ending hope. Thank you for this offering, Phyllis. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Congratz my friend!!

Excellent poem!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

congrats, sweet pea! couldn't happen to a nicer person!

nice write; well done!

happy holidays to you and yours!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Congrats! Great voice in this write.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

An eclectic write that shines brightly.

Congratulations!!!!!!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

My congratulations to you, Pea. This is wonderful poetry. Kind of a collage of life.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

This is a wonderful poem...That ending >>a wren builds a nest with aluminum foil
and string from an unwanted gift
and starts a family
< <

Is simply FANTABULOUS!

D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Congrats on both the Reading and the Publication, Phyllis; it's a marvelous poem, and I especially like the last Hope-filled stanza.

Forge Ahead! And Happy Holidays to you and yours.