{The photo, given it takes, is of apple blossoms suffering from blight. Pea<3 }
Please note: I didn't give this poem enough time. Sorry!! Skip it, but please, if you will, check out 'The Belt,' which I am planning to post later tonight. It is a revision of the poem on this page which I believe makes clear that the poem is about a child being beaten with a belt with a heavy metal buckle. Thanks so much for being here. Being patient with me!
Leather, Men’s size 34. Leather, say a quarter of an inch thick. Width, say an inch. Buckle, two. Buckle a souvenir she picked up on a trip to Memphis to stick it to the stick-in-the-mud she married. Found the belt tucked way back, thought, this will do. Better hang it on the back of the bathroom door to keep it handy. Big diamond stands out, and a mockingbird. Metal so shiny, one look hurts. Apple blossoms. Apple blossoms almost too small to see are stamped on all four sides. Rage flies out of nowhere, Go get the belt! Go get the belt, I said! Skin you alive!! Leather, say a quarter of an inch thick. Width, say an inch. Buckle
Intriguing. Powerful in its twist and shock. Reminds me of the way memories flood us sometimes through our glances at common place items and also how passive agressives work back out their angst. But I'm not sure that is what the poem's about, Phyllis. Still I found it appealing like a mood on film. It will stick with me, and that makes it better. ~~Nordette
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
Love Tinka
Chilling imagery...fragmented memories of a nightmare, or nightmarish memories?? Excellent, brutal write--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *tears*