{M u c h-needed revision of 'Arkansas Tattoos...' Latter title meant to refer to blood and bruises caused by
the belt. Sorry for not being clear. Was in too big a hurry. Not sure I have the skill to ...nevermind. Let me know how you feel about this version, if you have time. . .& aren't totally out of patience. Merci, mes ami, Pea <3
T h e B e l t
Leather, Men’s size 34. Leather, say a quarter of an inch thick. Width, say an inch. Buckle, two. Buckle a souvenir the mother picked up on a trip to Memphis to stick it to the stick-in-the-mud she was stuck with. Mr. Conservative with his white shirts and funeral suits turns up his nose. Told you to buy me a belt, he sniffs. Not trash a rodeo clown would wear. Later she found it tucked way back, thought, this’ll do the trick. Hang it on the back of the bathroom door, be handy. Still see the Arkansas flag embossed. Squeezed in the state bird. Mockingbird mocks. Metal’s so shiny, look hurts. In time, the target will learn the flowers stamped around the edge were apple blossoms. State flower, yes. Almost too little to see. What with rage flying out of nowhere. Go get the belt! she screams. Go get the belt! she shouts. Going to skin you alive!!
Leather, say a quarter of an inch thick. Width, say an inch. Buckle
Your poem sucked me in, but I am still unclear as to the use of the belt. Is it to spank the child, would her husband punish her by beating her with it, will she use it to hang herself or strangle her husband? Perhaps the belt will be used for all these things. The shiny buckle made me think that a child has studied it and looked at it in fear. This is a good poem, Pea, it leaves the reader to insert their own thoughts as to who would be using the belt and how. I was spanked with a belt on an occasion or two as a child, perhaps I am injecting my own fears here.
Take care,
Sherry
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
I still think this evokes nightmarish images of abuse...powerfully written memories.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Take care,
Sherry
Intriguing composition. Its imagery strikes attention, and its
rhythm flows vividly. "T h e B e l t" offers a live depicting
of a family´s affairs.
I enjoyed the reading of "T h e B e l t".
Long Healthy Creative Life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU