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Solo to Funeral Hill
by Phyllis Jean Green → (All Poetry by Phyllis Jean Green)
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The children in this poem are fictional, but the girl and I both spent time on "Funeral Hill." I have an almost Disneyesque memory of lying on grass soft as kitten fur and green as an emerald. Above was a coloring
book sky. Watching dandelion fluff parachute to the ground, I dreamed of being lifted onto a fluffy white cloud and carried to a Dick-and-Jane world where no one raised their voices unless it was to laugh or shout "ollee-ollee-home-free." After awhile, the grass started to tickle and the sun got a bit overenthusiastic, but while it lasted. . .oh, my.

Incidentally, the girl and boy in the poem do not know each other. Or do. All that matters is that nature is helping to heal what ails them. Put back the pieces thrown about by disturbed parents. . .like that.

Bless you for stopping by.

'Pea' |<3

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She remembers


A four-leaf-clover came out of hiding


as I bee-lined for my hiding place


on Funeral Hill.  All summer, a carpet


waited for me to add the simple stitch


that made it mine. Thread lemon-lime.


No sting, just a tickle.  Butterlies flew


the rug down, I decided.  As they spread


it, their wings dropped black and yellow


clues.  Only little ones.   Helped


that the hill hid the scary, blue-lit Home


with its curtained hearse down to one side.


I took off my shoes and let my feet climb


their way.  Leftover rain put out the fire


from a walk people said could fry eggs.


Smoooooth up here.  Elves must have danced.


Then they pirouetted green to the trees


and embroidered them to match.  My knees


got tickled by dandelion windmills and blue


mirroring flowers too little to hold up


a red ant.  Sun buttered a cloud and sang


that it was good to reach.  I did.


Then I took the clover out of my pocket,


kissed it, and laid it to rest.



He remembers


Fire-engine-red wagon littered with tinsel


and needles instead of the asked-for easel


and paints.  Santa groaning he had forked


blood.   No Boy of Mine, so on, so forth.


I traded for a bike with a basket and neon


stripe.  Chain busted. Busted, too,


I took off.  In no time, was sweating


up the hill ghosts were greening.  Ghoul blue


glow-wormed Funeral Home Spooked,


I scooted around to the other side.  Fell


in a heap, ended up dreaming the bike


fixed itself.  I was winning the last race


when I started itching like fire.  Oh, no.


Only hope they’re scared I got kidnapped.


Run over, something. Devil’s food


in the fridge.  Get it instead of his strop?


Right. Top with blisters and a rash.


Young heal fast.  I was soon climbing


back up the hill, beat-up army blanket


dragging behind.  Pockets about to split,


so full of questions for the dead.


 


(c)  Phyllis Jean Green


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 Reviews of "Solo to Funeral Hill"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 22, 2005
I love the trickling flow of thoughts, like butterflies on the one-hand, and then, fast-paced like a bee on the other - so childlike! It plays like a rapid piano-piece, resonating wholly with the strings of my childhood somewhere deep inside where I haven't - if ever! - lifted the lid for a while! Both poem and introduction are captivating and your use of language versatile and robust - like Eileen, love the image of the sun buttering the cloud: now THAT is divine - and seen through the eyes of a child! Gorgeous... tasty, in fact! :)) LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2005
This speaks volumes! Fantastic write.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 22, 2005
This is captivating Pea Girl. Thank you for sharing your gift. Beautifully expressed and shared. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
Full of poetic creativity, two thumbs up.

Take care

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 19, 2005
Bittersweet is our youth, Pea. I too recall having to tow the line or meet with the paddle or whatever else might serve the purpose at he time, but for me it was only when deserved. I had my special place too, up on a grassy hill where no one ever ventured. There I could be alone with myself and my thoughts. The beauty that surrounded me there spoke to me within my soul and sang to me the poetry of life. Great write!

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 19, 2005
Well done Pea, this is a joy to read and yes makes us travel back in time to our youth and similar memories.

Felix

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on August 18, 2005
Hi Pea. I've read through this poem three times and I think the more I read it, the more I'll find hidden in your truly unique language. I think I'll be back and read it again. Somewhere in it some of us will find ourselves taking that solo walk up the hill.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 18, 2005
This is so unique Pea, and bursting with poignancy...beautifully written, great lines like "Sun buttered a cloud and sang" Excellent!

Eileen


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