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Up There Gettin 'er Done
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The clock I am planning to use as an illustration is very much like the one Dad ( aka Joe aka the father I won when I married the handsome acorn that fell near:) ) built for Ray and I. Ours is purdier, of course. Best thing is that Dad is literally with us. Reminds us every time we walk down the hall to savor the beauty. Hell with the time!
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Special thanks to Carmen and Sandie for the beautiful tributes that helped inspire me to try to put into words my admiration and affection for the man who taught me what father means. DAD. Others among you have written wonderfully creative and deeply touching tributes.
B l e s s y o u!
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Love and Awe,

'Pea'<3


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   .Up There Gettin ’er Done
                  [for Joe]
 
He wanted folks to call him Joe.
Naturally it was Edgar, Edgar.
With a smile and a wink, he let it go.
Name don’ make a man, you know.
 
“Father-in-law” for hoity-toits.
Just like that, I had a Dad.
Biology may have made a point,
but Dad won the field for love.
 
More country gent than good ol’ boy,
wicked glint in his foolproof  eyes.
Clear as an Ozark crick  don’ toy.
Talked when he had something to talk.
 
Where he  come from,  got ‘er done.
Git yourself to a workshop and plane.
Carve gewgaws, make shelves to put ‘em  on
for the Missuz.   Dadburn grandfather clock.
 
As for politics and such crimes,
Joe had a saying fit tongue-and-groove
Rather look a mule in the ass anytime.
Never heard him cuss but the one time.
 
Dad got diabetes, and it hit him hard.
Lost a leg.  Had a couple strokes.
Caught us all off guard.
Worst was, he lost his beloved farm.
 
Never mind, Daughter.   Hear my new joke?   
Sun  still  rises.   Fish  still  bite.
Can’t write more,   starting to choke.
Never let you go, Dad.  Never let you go.
 
 
©) Phyllis Jean Green, 2005  

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Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Reviewed on October 12, 2005
Special tribute for a special dad. Thanks for sharing this, it brought back some memories for me and my dad.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 30, 2005
Yes indeed. A treasure of a tribute. Thank you for sharing it, Pea. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on September 30, 2005
Powerful moving tribute, Pea! Just got to love it! Beautiful nostalgic write!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
Very impressive tribute Pea, excellent!

peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
fantastic tribute....BHUWAN!!

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
Oh the Da, no one like the da.

Loved your Tribute Pea
:):)
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
Most excellent Tribute Pea!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Safi Abdi
Reviewed on September 28, 2005
<Talked when he had something to talk> such wisdom!

Wonderful tribute!

Safi

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on September 28, 2005
Oh Phyllis, this is heart-moving!
'Never mind, Daughter. Hear my new joke?
Sun still rises...'
The precious lessons we learn ... and to receive them from one's father is such a Great Blessing! I connect with you on the depth of love you have for your father ... It's a Spiritual Connection that transcends this life... our hearts can only believe in this probable actuality!
Bless your loving heart Phyllis
Love Suzie xoxxoxoxoxoxxxoxxoxox :-)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2005
Choked up this old critter. I have that damned diabetes also. Hell of a tribute!

Reviewed by White Dove left (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2005
Wonderful talent you have

Reviewed on September 28, 2005

Sublimity, beauty and grace met to compose this masterpiece...
"Up There Gettin 'er Done" will show readers throughout the millennia the picture of a heart that pumps love.

I salute You, Sublime Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on September 28, 2005
Awww Jean, I'm pleasantly surprised and deeply touched by the compliment! Tears of gratitude well in my eyes -- now see what you've done? Life hurts like hell some times, but thank goodnes we have a heart and a mind choosing to retain all that is good and so we keep it all close to us and forever alive, no matter what. And some of us well know how to make lemonade; don't we? Love ya.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 28, 2005
Pea, this is a grand and eloquent tribute! It really shows
the depth of your caring, and it is beautifully conceived!

Eileen


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