A Poem of Thanks
to Poets who Know who They Are
This is bad. I have words. I have phrases.
This small amount of talent and a Bic that erases.
I picture a giant fridge plastered with magnets,
Each with a glowing adjective (ballsy, say, or magic).
I picture trying to arrange them in a way that will do
To express my gratitude for all you are, all you do.
But the magnets are weak, and the words go plop.
Adjectives tired and trite, or just plain flop.
Don't begin to describe how you help poets like me
Get past our pounding hearts and quaking knees.
Teach us to listen more and spout less. (Even moi.).
Take care that metaphors add more than rob.
That we need to be clear at nearly any cost.
At the same time show The Rule Book it is not Boss.
Me, you have inspired with your bravery and wit.
Me, you have shown it can be good not to fit.
To admit that Hey, I am a fool. Not the worst fate.
Far worse never to rail against Prejudice and Hate.
Never to honor a memory by being flat-out honest.
Never to look deeper. Be a Doubting Miz Thomas?
Need to have faith and hope and. . .music!
The wit to find a rhyme for a word like. . .music!
Best add your voice to the choir, however so-so.
Remember that off-key ain' no way a no-no.
Sorry for sounding silly and for being so late
With my inane but heartfelt, Thank you, mates!
<3 Pea <3
aka Phyllis Jean Green aka The Poet who Didn't Know. . .Doesn't Always Now (c)
That GOT my attention Pea~
No kiddin'
I love your Honest ways!
I'm glad I write so bluntly now...
It's nice to be finding others lately!
YOU are the Blessing! too~
WArmly,Sheee
Read some of your poems . They are not only well written they are heartfelt with a message to each one. "A Poem of Thanks to Poets who Know who They are" is one of my favorites as is the one that was inspired by your Granddaughter. All the Best! Feel free to drop by my site at www.freewebs.com/kendoo/ I am also here in the author's den.com
Carole
Aberjhani
Regis
Maaate, a winner TY
Ch'erie
You go girl. Another good one from you.
Elizabeth
Love Tinka
Fee
Your gliterati The S Word is cruising Hollywood gay starlet with silver wingtips on lavender boots, Love, Sage
Wonderful composition glowing wit-wise ~enchanting and inspiring~ with an excellent poetic voice and rhythm... A tray of ambrosias in
"A Poem of Thanks to Poets who Know who They Are".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Very well done.
Hugs and respect,
CJ
"Take care that metaphors add more than rob.
That we need to be clear at nearly any cost.
At the same time show The Rule Book it is not Boss."
Splendid poetry! Thanks!
You made me cry with this awesome poem of gratitude! You inspire me with your "small amount of talent and a Bic that erases." WHAAAAAAAAT? What de heck you talkin' 'bout! I wish I had YOUR talent. Every poem I read of yours makes me wish I'd written it, durn it, and I have to repent to the Saviour for envy! :) Seriously, Pea, you are one of my faves, and it is I who should be thanking you. So, thank you. (And, you're welcome. :))
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Peace. Joyce