T h a n k y o u for your warm and encouraging responses re my accident. Fell while trying to control dog Nick...simultaneously dash to greet my daughter and two granddaughters. . .off our boardwalk onto rt. side. Fracture's healing & shoulder relocating. Not that I'm n o t complaining! Hurts like bloody fire.
Slows my already too-slow self. Ray spent a day building a special tray, or I wouldn't be writing this. Friend shows up with meals; others call long-distance. Family so supportive. Please believe me, I know how lucky I am!!! Home is really home, and that is no small thing. Thanks again for the boosts. Hope you enjoy my current off'ring, warts & all. Love, Pea
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Only Fractured, Only a Wing
With the mouse on a tray on my lap and the keyboard hanging onto the edge of the door I use to compute, it is possible to type. A shoulder screams, but possibility feeds my addiction. Drug only we few sell all for. Prodding, dragging Muse won’t let us stop. Have to. Have to. Have to stop. Fractured arm hangs in a non-covered sling. Neck wrenches into kinks. But like the song says, fish gotta swim, birds gotta, ‘cet. We gotta write until we fly. Keep picturing the stubborn V’s migration requires. Hear platoons of geese honk their ballsy, nails-on-chalkboard honks. See an old tree worm and twist new roots around chunks of iron. Whales flee giant oil spills. Beaten down women pack their few possessions and go on the lam, children in tow. My brother used to be Houdini. Grew up, felt forced to choose suicide We Writers cannot escape the greater escape that lathes wind beneath the odd dislocated wing. Physical pain a mercy next to pain within that has no outlet. . .right? Oh hell. What is a twinge compared to the fun of embroidering lies. Miraculously, some detour beyond True. Got a lamp on loan, complete with genie. Sweet
Sorry about your accident, can happen to anyone, last summer I stepped off the deck steps and I really don't know what I done, but the next thing I know...I stretched out in the yard with a broke foot, wanted to put a sign up..watch your step that first one is a lulu...anyway I was just a clutz! Your write was great, and the muse still strong...great write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Pea, this is so full of pep and optimism. Yes, we write despite anything and everything going on around us. And so right you are: it's only physical pain; it passes. I'm so proud of you. You keep on writing. This is a very good poem, to say the least.
Carmen
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2007
I am so sorry pea your in my prayers I loved the POEM :)
God Bless,
Joselyn
Gotta do what ya gotta do, Pea, to survive; you've done wonders, fracture/dislocations and all. I'm sorry you hurt yourself--gotta watch them dogs! Keep writing (hunting/pecking), and I'll keep reading every blessed word! Promise!
loved it! You really know how to express your thoughts yes we Gotta write!!
This poem reminds me of an angel with a broken wing in your case a fracture arm same thing!!
Excellent Imagery and flow!!
Love And Peace To You Always ...Morning Star..Get well Soon!!
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
Reg
Carole
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Carmen
God Bless,
Joselyn
Peace. Joyce
Love Tinka
Glad to see you posting again, you were missed.
Fee
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
(((gentle HUGS))) and much love, Karla.
An excellent write, despite the pain...
This poem reminds me of an angel with a broken wing in your case a fracture arm same thing!!
Excellent Imagery and flow!!
Love And Peace To You Always ...Morning Star..Get well Soon!!
"Only Fractured, Only a Wing" strikes thoughts on all courses of life... It takes the reader on a trip to the reminiscent cosmos.
I have enjoyed the reading of this outstanding poetic writing... A learning deep growing moment.
Thank You for sharing "Only Fractured, Only a Wing".
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU