He makes his side of the bed. She makes hers. A routine long ago established. He goes to let the dog out. She straightens the pillow on his side then opens a closet to fish out red slacks and a tee. He is in the kitchen now turning on coffee. Forgot they could set on automatic.
All the small acts we repeat, reset, repeat don't matter until they stop
Phyllis, I think out friend Andy may have read your mind or at least mine. Oh my, time for a spark !
Well crafted, Pea...and it speaks volumes.
Love,
Taylor
Yes. We don't think about what we do sometimes until our world is turned upside down, and everything is shaken about. Hospital rooms do that. So does moving, making new friends, getting a new job. The unexpected can do it. Fall over the dog, wrench your knee. EREEEEyoooow. Ohoh. Nice job
I love the raw slice of this relationship....I also had tears this is excellent for Valentines Day a life time with love, carying, Beautiful PEA!!!!!!!
Happy V Day
Joselyn
The feelings of a lifetime together, the love, the care, the bittersweet; are so palpable, it brought tears of recognition to my eyes. This is a most touching and vulnerable rendition of love.
Carmen
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2007
Sometimes, we don't realize how much we treasure these little routines until they're broken.
The daily routine goes on without notice until one day it no longer can and at that moment, we find that we knew comfort in that old rut of ours and that we really did appreciate that HE let the dog out and HE started our coffee. All of the little things that go into a couple's life become so important and so touching after our mate leaves us. Our life will never again be the same and we are forced to learn a different way that we never wanted to know. There is so much sadness in this offering, Pea, but you remind us all to take time to appreciate it all, because one day, it may all come tumbling down at our feet. I hope you are not writing this about your life, perhaps just an observation while waiting on a friend in a hospital.
Take care,
Sherry
Such a sadness about this write...very touching, sometimes we tend to forget how much we appreciate the little moments such as these when shared with our companion...very emotional write here my friend, makes one stop and think about the little things that our mate irritates us with, maybe we shouldn't complain but yet enjoy while we have them....you've given me tears this Sunday morning Pea...
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
This is so sad, the things we think about in the hospital worried about someone we love. Even the smallest things become so endearing. This is so well done, Pea. You've brought up some memories of my own today.
Love,
CJ
Phyllis,
How sad it is, when we wake to find our loved ones have left us to make both sides of the bed, and mash the button on the coffee pot alone.
It takes awhile to remember not place two cups on the counter, but sadly in time we find ourselves only grabbing one.
Re-Release! No longer back-listed. Return to the Olde Ways. The hustle and bustle of modern day life has brought many of us to a quick fix attitude.This book is for those of you who are fed up; have looked at your life and your loved ones and realize
Re-Release! No longer back-listed. Return to the Olde Ways. The hustle and bustle of modern day life has brought many of us to a quick fix attitude.This book is for those of you who are fed up; have looked at your life and your loved ones and realize
Well crafted, Pea...and it speaks volumes.
Love,
Taylor
Karen
Wise thoughts.
Healthy long life may You and Yours enjoy, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Loved this piece
Love & Peace
William
Happy V Day
Joselyn
Carmen
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
thought provoking and well written ...
wishing you the best
(hope this isn't personal)
the picture matches the feel of this piece
sadness done well!!!
This one reaches in and disturbs the common routine: lingers long after having been read. Well done, hope this finds you well.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Life is so funny how much we become creatures of habit.
love and peace, Carole
I saw the ocean so maybe.....nevermind...this was GOOD!!
Love Tinka
Regis
Take care,
Sherry
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Love,
CJ
How sad it is, when we wake to find our loved ones have left us to make both sides of the bed, and mash the button on the coffee pot alone.
It takes awhile to remember not place two cups on the counter, but sadly in time we find ourselves only grabbing one.
Lisa