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Time's Up
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                       Time’s Up
 
He spends his days sorting pieces from bits.
She spends hers on what her mother calls dribs
and drabs.  Time does not fly, it gulps oxygen
and climbs on a shuttle attached to a rocket.
He had big dreams.   She  wanted the world
on a string.  Instead, he bores with this board
or that, and she directs traffic between selling,
playdates. and the right weddings and mitzvahs.
They wave to each other from their cars.
Blackberry reminders to buy lettuce or gas
and get Furball fixed.  Oh, and they forgot
to make an appointment to make a kid.
Maybe do something with the one we got.
Won’t always be busy, they tell themselves
as the phone rings when they are making love.
Gotta get ahead, gotta get ahead, gotta go,
gotta get, gotta run, gotta show, gotta rack
up those greenbacks, gotta hit the line,  gotta
heat-wash-pump-flex-order-floss, then dash..
Got charts to chart and posts to post.
Gotta buy, gotta shop, gotta buy.  Gotta
kiss another ass, gotta blog about a pass.
Migraine now and then or ulcer or affair
just part of the price.   Like overhead.  Like tax.
Someday they will do Hawaii together,
or St. Barts.  Someday they will linger
over a couple Mai Tais or fro-yos and lattes.
Someday he will look into her eyes, and she
will look back.  Been too long, both text
as they rush to suit up for committees
each heads.  Too young to die, too old
to ask why, the he in him disappears, and the she
in her.   Just shells of themselves.  Brrrrrrrrrrrr.

     

                      (c) Phyllis Jean Green, 2007

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 Reviews of "Time's Up"
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on May 29, 2007
Yes...Time is up...and so much of what we had, has been wasted!

Make memories...if all the computers crashed and all the DVD's melted...
Where are our memories of love? the family?, the children? the garden? nature?...
just peace and quiet,with the stillness to listen and the experiences to create...?
Loved this write PEA~
Excellent job!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 24, 2007
BRILLIANT! So compelling and I love the details you have chosen. This is close to the bone for more of us than care to admit, I'm sure. But, like looking into a crystal mirror, the reflection is fascinating. Very well-written and constructed, Pea. Ty Kate xx

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on May 23, 2007
today society wrapped in these words
bills and taxes and chores will always be it is us who ison borrowed limited time

E. said it "smell the roses"
great emotions!

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on May 22, 2007
yep...in this day and age, taking time to "smell the roses" is only a cute phrase and not an undertaking. I like this. It is sad but unfortunately true in its depiction of our society today.

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on May 21, 2007
Really LIKE that pic and the active terms (gulp oxygen' especially) . . .gave me the hiccups this was so vivid Sis PEA!
love, cynth'ya

Reviewed on May 21, 2007
hey Phyllis, great reminder of the married life sometime, I see you tried to add afew more to me, myself and I. I really was trying to keep the rest hidden, I don't trust the fools

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed
Reviewed on May 21, 2007
Well witten, Dear Phyllis. This is the exact way of life for many people. Everyone had a dream when they were young. They end up elsewhere. Couples dream of happy life together. But life takes them apart. However, we need to cope and do our best.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful work.
Abdullahi

Reviewed on May 21, 2007
I'm impressed some very wise observations wonderfully expressed in poetry.

Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2007
Wow, you have acheived so much with your writing and I really like this. Powerful and very thought provoking. Love, Theresa. x

Reviewed on May 21, 2007
Pea,

Deeply effecting, thought provoking wonder of verse! I love the way you write. You get into the soul and spill it onto the page: beautiful, once again.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 21, 2007
Enjoyed this much my friend, a profound write well penned!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
very effective ... excellent ... enjoyed reading immensely ...

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
A very powerful and very profound
I love this line, kiss another ass, gotta blog about a pass.
Migraine now and then or ulcer or affair!
Yep must agreed with Karen Vanderlaan
We must put things into perspective!
Outstanding Write!!
Love and Peace to you always
Your friend...Morning Star

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
very well done and thought provoking as well--helps one put things into perspective

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
I have travelled those roads and only ceased when a bum heart turned me into the take stock hotel where I did just that to discover an early grave don't pay for all we do.

Fee

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
A frantic write, packed and written like the lives it speaks of. well done, I especially liked the line "forgot time to make a kid, maybe we'll do something with the one we got" there's a classic post up note. Lady J

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
That sure is the way things are these days. Gotta do this and gotta do that. And I think the younger generation likes it this way. Busy busy busy.

Splendid work

Quiet nights and sweet dreams
HH

Reviewed on May 20, 2007
BRILLANT!!!

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Oh how I've missed your visual foray's into social melee Pea, you write with such aplomb and capture picture perfect. Brilliant! It's good to be back.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Very powerful write

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Absolutely most powerful!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
excellent!

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
powerful write my friend...enjoyed!



Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
kinda makes sense of my tarot by sage card THE CAROUSEL, six revolutions per minute, the perfect pace to live life, a dyin' breed, the standers, jumpers, and top-knots, the slow ponies in the center ring prancin' to the Wurlitzer...my favorite line, "Gotta kiss another ass" Chevy Chase didn't get his Christmas bonus...this has excellent song potential, one of your first that I have read that crosses over to another genre, Pea...be well you and Ray...tie-dye a dream today, stencil a wall, take time to throw a softball...

Sage, your gliterati Hollywood doll

Reviewed by Spirit Warrior
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
No thanks,


I'd rather live
The life that I do

Poor and humble
Without any strife

Oh...but I do...I do



God Bless -Spirit Warrior


Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
A very good description of the modern day rat race. How sad we have all become. The beauty is in the simple things, it truely is. Good write.

Be safe,
Karen


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