Lonesome was a train shrieking field to field, crossing to crossing Lonesome was eighteen-wheel brights burning tunnels in fog to make up for lost time. The now and again glint of a car stealing dark and quiet on its way to a grave-yard shift or hospital or bar. Maybe gunning it home or somewhere might pass.
Lonesome was a dog most likely starving that someone uncaring chained on hardpan not worth the fence. Weeds and a couple empty plastic bowls. Hound’s only saving grace is it can bark itself hoarse. See the poor thing stretch out a last long keen.
Lonesome was the kind of night your mother barked Get out so a stranger could enter and exit without being seen. Rain and curb-hugging creeps led to begging a bed off a friend who would never stop being snowed by a jerk with paler skin circling the key finger. Grudging yes, but the two twanged springs ‘til the ceiling threatened to fall. Laughed above the radio so you wouldn’t miss. What’s with the one thin-ass cover?
Lonesome was waiting for books to become friends, print and blank. Treading past thirty-something to be able to thrill at alone shaking hands with a dog. or a long, slow, train i l l u m i n a t i n g n i g h t. .
Very picturesque work. I liked how the words gave the feelings of motion outside in the silence of the paved road and inside with rafters shaking. Thanks for sharing.
What an outstanding write, full of powerful imagery. The train whistle in the night brings back many memories for me...reminds me of my mother's strength, of nights spent at church, our church was beside of train tracks, many niights we came out and could hear the train whistle sounding it's warning to those in the parking lot...again a powerful write, bringing many memories that are not quite as fond as mine...you've penned it well my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Train whistles in the night or day
Always brings back to live very bad
Memories for me for a train kill my cousin when
we where about 8 years old!!!
I love your piece it's very powerful and captivating
Great Imagery and Flow!!
Love Peace and Happiness to you my friend...Morning Star
You took me there and brought back the era of riding the rails in engaging, beautiful lines: thank you for letting me hop onto the cars of imagination and cleverness! Love this, love you more!!
This is fantastic...one of the very best...I went with you on this trip to the edges of reality where the pain of lonliness aches like a toothache that won't go away. You touched the raw chords of emptiness that uncaring people sow and the innocent reap...this time though a flower grew and you are the rose.
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Blessings,
Joyce B.
Love Tinka
Always brings back to live very bad
Memories for me for a train kill my cousin when
we where about 8 years old!!!
I love your piece it's very powerful and captivating
Great Imagery and Flow!!
Love Peace and Happiness to you my friend...Morning Star
You took me there and brought back the era of riding the rails in engaging, beautiful lines: thank you for letting me hop onto the cars of imagination and cleverness! Love this, love you more!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
So very good, just excellent!
Joy and more joy
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Fee
Thanks,
Dan