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Silver Goes Platinum
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This is a revised version of a poem that won Special Recognition from VoicesNet several years ago. Hope you like it! xOx Pea xOx


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           Silver Goes Platinum


 
A cloudburst cools a sweat-suited day,
allowing green to wax sublime.
 
A night of forgotten cups and paces
ends in, “She’ll be fine.”
 
A shower  fills a dead-dry creek
coaxing children to bloom on its banks.
 
Another  long  dry   work   week
pays a few bills.  Thanks.
 
A hint of a smile from a dying friend
ties a bow around  Please know I love you.
 
A fire  fights a chill with its own special blend
of pine scent and sparkles red, orange, blue.
 
A defiant child volunteers,  "Sorry,"
then dashes, all knees and elbows, for a hug.
 
A long-awaited letter puts  an end  to worry
while giving conscience a  needed  tug.
 
A critter who has been hard not to hate
breaks you up over a “squirrel-proof” feeder.
 
A break in traffic keeps you from being late
for a healthy dose of theater.
 
A weed sprouts a flower of surprising beauty,
nudging memory to present a hollyhock doll.
 
A friend hurdles shyness to do his duty
by refusing to let Ignorance speak for all.
 
A telephone wire beside a road you take home
glitters copper, erasing litter and the blahs
 
As lavender and apricot twilight a dome,
sealing proof that Life holds beauty and heart.

 

               (c) Phyllis Jean Green, 2007


     

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 Reviews of "Silver Goes Platinum"
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 23, 2007
Everyday life can be rewarding, when we continue to find the good and the beauty in it. Thank you for sharing such wonderful words Phyllis.

Rose

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on July 20, 2007
Beautiful imagery. Liz

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2007
Your words paint a picture all it's own. lady j

Reviewed on July 19, 2007
Pea,

Silver goes platinum in beautifully imaged lines. One sees the doll in all of its preciousness; a simpler place and time comes vividly to life in your pen. Well done, my (((friend))).

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Life can be what we make it..
Thanks for sharing...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Wonderful take on the emotions of life.

Fee

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Life is very beautiful I don't think I ever
Own one of those hollyhock doll
But your chosen words I could almost see
this beautiful doll through the
vividness and imagery captured here
In this stunning write!!
Love Peace and Joy and many Hugsss..Morning Star

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Yes life is beautiful. Very visual. Victor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Brava.....excellent piece!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Truy poetic and heartwarming. I remember hollyhock dolls in kindergarten and that was, well, uhh, several years ago. lol!! Enjoyed this blessing in writing.

George

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
This work caused great emotion for me- it is such a wonderful work showing so much to be amazed at and appreciative of in the often strenuous journey thet life is-thank you


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